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freeindeed-biblegmail-com submitted a contest entry to
Write a love letter to something (not someone) that you love 3 months, 3 weeks agoMore than a thing...
Timbonics' 101 WillistrationsI love books but the Only One Thing
Is the Love story of God, that to me brings:
Peace and Joy, Contentment to the full-
Like carrying a baby on a baby stroll.That’s One Thing, that is more than a thing
Always blows my mind, with exciting dreams.
Though not regular dreams as when one sleeps,
Their the dreams of imagination-
That eternal relations keep.This library daily I seem to walk into
Holding life barely by the Word of Truth.
This thing is a box I’m locked inside,
Never can I get out, It is the place I hide.But there is always light on the inside,
That from the top it clearly shines.
When I look below I see nothing at all,
For the only place to go, is upward climbing the wall.Neither can you see in the dark
But the speed of light ran, and has me marked.
Inside this box that happens to be a Book;
Instruction number one is just to simply look.Then I learn, listen, and live-
No words of my own for you to give.
And no not at all am I ashamed of this,
Nothing belongs to me, I’m lucky to exist.Though may I hear no luck in vocabulary
I’ll only fear God, but not a fear that’s scary.
Rather a love-try of mutual respect,
One that walks with me and never neglects.A new life, a new mourn,
In a hidden concealed heart…
But always the same Christ,
Teaching my foolishness to be smart.I just cannot get out of the Bible,
Shoe-tying knots… For a long while.
Walking into this Cannon of Truth,
Is yes and amen to all good that’s due.Neer’ would I ever want to be released,
That for me is not a good thing.
I’ll stay chained, a slave of this Book,
Where I know Jesus saves every direction that I look 🙂2-23-25
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It is so wonderful that you find so much comfort in the word of God and that no other book compares. For so many people, the holy Bible is a source of inspiration, motivation, and soulful observation. I love where you wrote, “I’ll stay chained, a slave of this book, where I know Jesus saves every direction that I look.” This is such a beautiful…read more
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James (Jim) Kellogg shared a letter in the
Chasing Your Dreams group 3 months, 3 weeks agoout of the echoing cave
Jim Kelloggout of the echoing cave
By: Jim Kellogg
(The Queer Poet)
2-2025the shards of glass
from the broken mirror
pierce the heavy and dark clouds
causing a turbulent storm
overwhelming and
tossing me around without direction
the invisible wounds have festered for years
leaking like droplets from a frozen river on a sunny day
i feel like i am trapped in an echoing cavethen…
i see her
my brave and cherished mother
a woman who shed her own tears
sometimes silent
sometimes wailing
she harkens me to the edge of the echoing cave
there…
she shows me an open window
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Jim, this is such a beautiful poem. I love how in your first stanza you describe the turmoil you felt and how it seemed to trap you inside. When you shift to seeing your mother and finding strength in her strength, it seems like the pain you felt melts away. Thank you for sharing your work!
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lostone89 submitted a contest entry to
Write a love letter to something (not someone) that you love 4 months agoWriting Love
Gerald WashingtonDear Writing,
When you came into my life in a new way seven years ago, I didn’t know then that it would be the love I wanted and needed. We became acquainted again thanks to a mother figure who showed me how glorious and attractive you are; inside and out.
My eyes became new when I saw you through her testimonies and words. Sadly, she would stop showing you around because her life became busy. Months passed by, and I kept hoping that she would show you around again, but there was something about you that kept calling me.
After wrestling with these new feelings, a lightbulb finally went off in my head to speak to you myself. When I started talking, you talked back with emphasis and enthusiasm. You allowed me to be a part of your home. You even introduced me to many people who would enrich my life in ways I couldn’t imagine.
Even though I would quickly become addicted to you, even over text you, it didn’t scare you off. If anything, you encouraged me to speak to you more, even at midnight. I’m terrible at saying the L word, but I hope I show my love for you and all you’ve done for me during our run together.
Your presence has given me the vitamins needed to thrive every day. Because of you, I have a much clearer vision of my creativity inside me. Without you, my life would be dramatically different in the last several years. I wish I had seen you in this light many years ago, but I guess I needed to do some discovering to find you.
I could thank you a billion times and it still wouldn’t be enough. When I read pieces from other writers who share their love for you, I truly get it. So, thank you, writing. I salute you, and I’ll keep honoring you for eternity.
Sincerely,
Gerald
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Gerald, this is so cool! I am so glad that you connect so strongly to writing– it’s a great habit to have!! Please keep sharing with the Unsealed, your pieces will not go unnoticed! Great work ♥
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Thank you so much, Harper! I appreciate your kind words and encouragement. I’ll keep sharing. 😀
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Benjamin Fuller shared a letter in the
Poetry group 4 months, 1 weeks agoShabbat Lamb
Benjamin M. FullerI am the Shabbat lamb that was stuck in a pit
Who watched as many shepherds passed by as I cried out for help
But no one cared as they carried on their way
For I was but a hindrance unto them and their pleasure
For I was a spotted lamb,
I was nobody’s treasure
As I stared at the sky, I couldn’t help but to think that this was the end
Starving for life, as I withered to dust
Seeing the day turn to dusk
And dusk into night
Until the darkness blinded my sight
I had given up hope, and accepted my death
But just when all seemed to be lost
There came One, who’s face shone like that of the sun
He reached down and pulled me up from the pit
And threw me over His shoulder as He said, “come with me little lamb”
In awe, I asked Him his name and all He said was “I AM”
He took me away to a place so near, yet so far
And began to mend every wound, every scar
He fed me until I was healthy and fat
And turned me loose, to roam through His pasture
And whenever I start to wander astray
He comes running to lead the way back home
Who am I to deserve so lovely a shepherd?
Who am I that He would smile upon me with such pleasure?
A spotted lamb, but yet I am His treasure-
Beautiful use of the images
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Your such a blessing with both your biblical messages and music thanks for being you ben much 💕
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I appreciate your kind words, but actually the musician and I are two different people lol. I’m just a nobody. Just a dude with a face…
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Benjamin, this poem is so powerful. I love how you use the image of the lamb to describe the way God’s love can rescue us from even the deepest pits. When no one else cares, we can still bask in His love. We are truly blessed to be one of His treasures. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.
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Shay Vogler shared a letter in the
Chasing Your Dreams group 4 months, 1 weeks agoEverything In Its Own Time
Shay VoglerWhat does it mean to have your dreams come true? I’m from a small town and my entire life I have heard “you can’t.” “You’re from a small town, it’s impossible.” Well, I am here to tell you, it is possible. If you were to ask any 10 people on the street, they would say “I wish I had chased my dreams when I was younger.” Everything has its own way of happening on its own time. And I am living proof. My first novel will be published on May 18th of this year, I have began to sing in public again after several years, I have someone who loves me for me and doesn’t look at me like an object and my family has seen my smile returned to me. Thank you The Unsealed for helping me achieve my writing dreams and I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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Shay, I am from a small town too and I’ve always thought that the way people’s dreams are often crushed because of location is simply unacceptable. We should all be encouraged to reach our goals no matter what part of the world we live in. I am so glad that you are reaching your dreams…and congratulations on your novel! Thank you for sharing!
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beyondme submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to your fear (Sponsored by ProWritingAid) 4 months, 1 weeks agoGod Is Great, Fear is a Liar, Grace Wins
BeyondMeGod is great, fear is a liar, Grace wins.
At first it won’t make sense.
I overthink so much until I make myself sick—I often think about all the what ifs and all the coulda shoulda beens
Playing images in my mind that break me down to the core…
The images that bring out the waterworks & leave your eyes sore.
The kind that have u grieving over something that may or may not be yours…
Now you’re left with this weight on your chest & a knot in your throat
The tears streaming down your face, re-living the pain
—over — and over
— and over again…I beat myself up not knowing wether I’ve done what’s right or wrong
Too afraid to repeat past patterns
Too afraid to throw myself back into the fire
Too afraid of the damage that can still be done after already going thru so much pain & sorrow.I remember what happened the last time.
& the time before that & I can’t help but think—What if it happens again
—God
I don’t know if I can handle it.They say old keys don’t open new doors .
They also say leave old shit in the past .Each situation is its own.
What if what failed back then, works for me now?
People wonder why I’m such an over-thinker
I hope you can see for yourself-howLook at what I just said—
—Shits always contradicting & confusingIt’s all a case by case basis
—and none of us have the recipe for each situationAll I know to be true — is you God
But I can’t always see you.
— and at times I struggle to feel or hear you…So I pray & pray.
Hoping you’ll hear me say.
I need you.I need you now as much as I did back then —
I need to hear you loud & clear again .
Like that day in my bedroom.
You gave me a quick glimpse at my future but it quickly escaped to
All a sudden I received a message but I don’t know where it came from?
It said to me…
Do you really think that laying something down at his feet —
Reaching out to him daily.
Choosing not to move-until you receive clarity.
Trying to let him take the lead…Will somehow cause you to lose something?—
To lose something thats destined for you ?…
Absolutely not. On the contrary.
He will bless you for your obedience.
For you guarding your heart.For you refusing to accept-less than what is right
— and not giving in to what is not .— and I know it will hurt to hear this but if it’s lost— it wasn’t yours to keep to begin with.
I know it’s hard to be still but don’t stress it.
Gods got this.
He knows best not only where u are but where you are going.— God is great, fear is a liar, & grace wins.
One day you will see you are not alone & you have never been…
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Aww, As a fellow over thinker, remember to always gives yourself grace. You so deserve it. I love this line, “He will bless you for your obedience.
For you guarding your heart.For you refusing to accept-less than what is right
— and not giving in to what is not .”Have faith. Keep your standards high, and trust that life will unfold how it’s s…read more
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kortkort submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to your fear (Sponsored by ProWritingAid) 4 months, 1 weeks agoFear of My Mind
Kortney R. GarwoodMy biggest fear is all in my mind.
Thinking of all the things that should’ve been left behind.
The things that I just can’t seem to let go of.The things that have set up shop in my mind.
Keeping me from absolute freedom,
and making me feel as though I’m stuck in time.The would haves.
The should haves.
The could haves.The times I didn’t speak my mind,
to address things that crossed the line.
The boundaries that were not developed,
and the ones I was afraid to use for my protection.Silently taught to keep quiet and let things be.
Shhh…. don’t rock the boat or create waves in the sea.
The sea being life.
Just do what’s right and sweep those feelings aside.
Everything is going to be alright.Not being taught to acknowledge, embrace, and accept my emotions.
Keeping those things tucked away,
as I put on a brave face and faced the day.
Just focus on the things that give you an important place in this world.
Not understanding that my feelings are the most important things in my world.Unresolved issues cause emotional trauma.
Spreading like wildfire,
affecting all facades of your life and causing unnecessary drama.My biggest fear is being trapped in this state.
Realizing that unresolved issues might be part of my fate.
But, like any other challenge in my life,
I’ll look this fear in the face and give myself grace.
Conquering my fear will mean letting go of the things I can’t control
as I honor the things that free my mind and feed my soul.(100% Style Score)
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Kortney, this is SO good!! Overthinking can be dangerous. We ALL get to this point somewhere in our lives. It is hard not to wonder what could have or should have been. As you said, we just have to give ourselves grace and remember that no matter how much we don’t like something we did or didn’t do, the past is in the past. Like it or not, we have…read more
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Thank you for the kind words. This is a struggle for me but I am learning how to give myself grace and let go of things I can’t control.
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moanalyssa_poetry submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to your fear (Sponsored by ProWritingAid) 4 months, 1 weeks agoAdversarial Ally
Alyssa GrimesI fear it is fear I do not lack.
Just a big scaredy-cat with panic attacks.
I react, such a strong impact,
the dread in my head on this body it attacks.
What was and wasn’t said, or may be fact,
or misread. I contend
with logic and reason, but anxiety
can be such a cancerous lesion.
It overtakes and takes and takes;
I feel possessed by a demon.
Such high stakes. It seems
a mutinous nervous system
has mastered its treason.
But to defy and spite these odds of plight
I battle my fright leaning towards the light.
Yes, it’s in the fight that we just might
us humans discover our animal bite;
true grit, to wit,
strength reminders that
we’re gonna be alright.
Fear is a catalyst and placeholder,
igniting a passionate motor,
and it summons forth our courage
while holding space for bravery to flourish.
I keep deep gratitude for the fear
and all it does dear
as it provides a clear need
for a solution to appear.
On the other side we find
hidden powers of the mind,
and the wisdom that is gained
is not earned in vain.
For all we attain through the pain
is too invaluable to complain,
and the hard-learned lessons remain
long after fear’s temporary reign.Style Score: 73%
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Alyssa, I love how you refer to fear as your adversarial ally. Though fear works against us, it teaches us a lot too. When we face fear head-on, successfully or not, we learn a lesson that will leave an impact. Fear can harm us, but it can also make us stronger. Thank you for sharing your experience.
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Thank you so much for reading and your support!
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freeindeed-biblegmail-com submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to your fear (Sponsored by ProWritingAid) 4 months, 2 weeks agoDear fear,
Timbonics' WillistrationsSame principle as-Dear John.
You are not leaving, So-I will!
You tell me so much-untrue,
So I am divorcing and leaving you!
Not married to you, nor addictions few-
You won’t go, won’t budge, So-I will move!Though I have no idea how,
My learns of Jesus-He makes free,
Giving me rest… And He will best teach me,
How to defeat your homemade nest of Glee.
The one you built for years on end,
A false comfort-false feeling friend…
You was/is/am not who I thought-
You’re lying surviving, dread to me brought.You can have me no more!
No reason any longer to fear myself,
For I don’t control me anymore -Jesus does!
Under His umbrella of Grace-
I’m found and completely safe!Fear… whence comest thou?
I know not-though we are parting ways…
No evil to fear for the rest of my days!
No lies beside me-Jesus keeps them away,
Though around the bend you may sit at Bay-
I see thee far off and turn to you deaf ear,
You seek but don’t find… Your voice I cannot hear!No words to you I have of my own,
Because Jesus true-builds me a new home!
You cannot have my kids, you cannot have my wife-
For you are dead my old cheating friend…
Because Jesus has ended your life!I’ve already known fear,
Now it’s time to know God-
And fear cannot win because…2 Timothy 1:7
For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, of love, and of a sound of mind.… This promised fact I trust and love!!!
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Timothy, yet another amazing piece! Fear can hold us captive and control our lives if we let it. I am so glad that you trust and faith in God has allowed you to defeat some of your fears. Keep up the great work. You have improved so much as a writer!! ♥
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Ty soooo much Harper V 😊
You are completely cool 😎
I always love your encouraging replies 🌹🌹🌹-
How sweet! I always love reading your pieces ☺
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Thank you so much Dear,
But no…
You are the sweet one
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charmainecasimir submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to your fear (Sponsored by ProWritingAid) 5 months ago"You Don't WIN"
Charmaine CasimirDear Fear,
You don’t win. You can not win. You tried to make me feel small. You tried to make me feel unimportant. I feel like the default, but you lied! Fear you tried to control my life and defeat me. I feel like the last, the go to,the one to settle for .
I feel like the one you have when it is now or never. I feel like the default is what I am, but I realize that is not true, I can not let that happen. Fear, you don’t win! You have talked to me, too much and too long. I am tired of listening to you. You are a liar and have no power. Fear, I face you straight on with God holding my hand. I am strong because you fought me so hard, you helped build my muscles. You “DON’T WIN”!!!With (my) Strongest Goodbyes,
God’s Child.
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Charmaine, I love this!! Fear is meant to show us how much courage we possess. It tests our limits and while it can be frustrating, it only makes us stronger. I am glad that you changed your perspective on fear and found how tp regain that control. ♥♥
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Harper, thank you so much for your uplifting words and encouragement. It is so appreciated. ❤️❤️❤️
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Darnel LaFrance shared a letter in the
Mental Health group 5 months agoThis post is viewable by the Unsealed community only.
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otherlover submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem about your goals for 2025 5 months agoThis post is viewable by the Unsealed community only.
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remcreatives submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem about your goals for 2025 5 months agoCycle
Rachel MilliganRound and Round I go on a carousel
For years its been
Now the cycle stops
Where there is room for mountains to grow
New opportunities to arise
For new ways for everything
Making new friends
Meeting new people
Starting from the same roots
But different colors and petals
Most importantly setting boundaries
with the people that mean the most
Positivity for the mind and soul
For the strength the waves give you
Pushing you until there is no more
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Rachel, life does feel like a constantly moving cycle that we cannot get out of sometimes. It feels like our lives control us instead of us controlling our lives. I am glad that you have found a way to stop the cycle and make your life what you want it to be this year! I hope that you are able to grow and create joy. Thank you for sharing your experience!
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hartsekl submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem about your goals for 2025 5 months agoNew Year's Resolution
K. HartsellThis is the year.
The year I let moss grow over my feet.
The year I bathe in the clouds as they kiss the ground.
The year I stretch my fingertips to tickle sun beams.
The year I sleep in the cradle of stars as they whisper lullabies.
The year I let raindrops dance around my smile.
The year I paint over my scars with dandelion wishes.This is the year:
The year I inhale peace and exhale you.Voting is closed
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This is beautiful and quite inspiring, I also believe nature is vital and all too often forgotten in our daily lives. I love how you took the time to find the ways to connect!
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Thank you. That’s the goal. Slow down, enjoy moments, and release toxicity. I wish more people found peace in nature.
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This is such an inspiring poem! To “inhale peace and exhale you” suggests that you are letting go of an important person in your life who no longer contributes to your peace. I hope that this year gives you a chance to get to know yourself again and embrace all that life puts in your path. Thank you for sharing your hope for the new year.
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Thank you so much! Yes, I am on a journey to reconnect to my roots and my soul. I’ve been working hard to heal and grow. Trying to let go of years of anger and resentment that have been festering and poisoning me. Thank you for the encouragement and for seeing me.
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charmainecasimir submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem about your goals for 2025 5 months, 1 weeks ago"He said, she said"
Charmaine CasimirHe said!!! She said!
He said my will be done!
She said New Edition of a Magazine.
He said my will be done!He said my will be done.
She said Relaunch podcast!
He said my will be done.He said my will be done!
She said Release my Memoir.
He said my will be done!He said my will be done.
She said go on Empowerment Tours!
He said my will be done.He said my will be done!
She said record my audio books.
He said my will be done!She said I want to do my best!!!
She said I will be Obedient!!!
She said I will walk in my Purpose!!!He said my will be done, 2025!!!
He said my will be done, Charmaine!!!
He said my will be done Forever!!!Voting is closed
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Charmaine, I love this! Commitment and consistency with goals is so important. You sound like you are willing to become more and more dedicated to achieving these milestones. You have my full support and excitement behind you! Keep up the great work! ♥
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I appreciate so much your kind words and support!Thank you<3
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Aww Charmaine, Keep stepping into your purpose. I love all of this. You are wonderful. <3 Lauren
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Thank you so much Lauren;) That is so sweet! You are wonderful too<3
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cbriddle submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to your fear (Sponsored by ProWritingAid) 5 months, 2 weeks agoHey Fear, Stay in your Lane
Chris RiddleHey Fear.
I really wish you were a rational, sensible friend. I wish you would only show up when I am in danger. When the visceral reaction to your presence would be to my benefit. I do not like being frozen in mid- thought. I do not like retreating into myself, pulling the door shut and building the walls a little higher.
I do not like the way you play with memories, unpacking the deepest of the trauma, the embarrassment, the reasons why I feel less than good enough. I do not like the way you weave those long packed away feelings into situations where they do not belong. I do not like the way you abuse my inner child. She should be dancing in the rain, she should wonder at the color of a violet, or the unique beauty of a snowflake. She should not be shaking so hard that I must revisit her trauma. Tend to her bruises or kiss away her tears.
I have done the work; I know that I no longer have to tolerate abuse in my life. I know that I am a work in process, ever evolving and growing. I know that I do not need to be perfect in order to get respect and be loved. I do not need you reminding me of a time when a harsh word, cruel intent, or landed punch came from someone I loved. Someone who said they loved me. Someone who would beg forgiveness, even as their next attack was being formed.
I know that I am strong. I know that I am fragile. I know that remembering can be part of healing. I know that I do not have to relive those days. I bare the scars as a survivor. I am proud of who I am, always true to myself through tears and humiliation. I have given myself permission to heal.
Fear, I do not want to confront you in places you do not belong. I do not want you to fill my days with ghosts of shame and dread. I do not want you to cost me sleep or invade my dreams. I do not want you to steal away my ability to feel the real joy and sorrow of life. I feel nothing in the wake of avoiding the worthlessness you make me feel.
Last of all Fear, I should always feel safe in my body. I am claiming it from you. It is mine and no one will ever force themself or their will on me ever again. No hand raised in anger, no cruel words will inflict pain. Never again will I be a tool for someone’s show of power or pleasure. I have some wrinkles, I’m not a model. I am me, and that’s a pretty amazing person to be.
Fear, I would gladly welcome and claim you in the right places. Where walking in your company means that I am aware and careful. Where the jolt of your presence is a call to attention, to action. You are valid and have a place. Please stay in your own lane.
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Chris, you are right that fear is not a rational or sensible friend. In fact, I’d even call it toxic. Like some friends only come around when they need something, fear only comes around when it wants to take our peace. You are right that there is a place for it, but as you said, it needs to stay in its own lane. Thank you for sharing your experience!
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Thank you Emmy, fear is real, and has its place. Your kind words felt great on my heart. I really appreciate the feedback
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I felt this so deeply & related so much as if I was reading one of my own pieces. Thank you for sharing your vulnerability yet amazing power & strength. Beautifully written 🌹☀️💕
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Thank you so much for your kind words. This piece represents a turning point in my healing, when I really understood why I didn’t feel safe, ever. It wasn’t where I was, it was reclaiming my right to my feelings, the safety of control over who touches me, why and how. I’m thankful that I now know.
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Lauren Brill shared a letter in the
Poetry group 5 months, 3 weeks agoForgotten
NasheshiaForgotten in the hidden emotions I feel,
Behind the weed and underneath the alcohol,SEEN too much,
HEARD too much,
KNOW TOO MUCH
Forgot to SPEAK UP
Because I didn’t know any better
And because you said I didn’t need any help,So I’m just another “mad black woman” who can do bad all by myself because you said
black people don’t need therapy
I listened
I believed you but I forgot to believe me
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poeticaddiction_365 submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem or letter about your best memory of 2024 6 months agoMy 2024 Glow
Tracy BarnesThe year is slowly approaching its end
And I have so many great memories
It’s hard to choose only one
But I do notice one commonality
All my favorite memories of 2024
Start and end with you
My Bae and I
Did vision boards to start the year
I surprised her with a Valentine’s Day date
To see B. Simone
Later in February
We ended up going to see
Elevation Worship and Steven Furtick
We laughed a lot
At We Them One’s Comedy Tour
Hosted by Mike Epps
We missed each other for days
That turned to months
Until we were reunited for my birthday trip
To Phoenix, Arizona
That started off a little rough
But ended up with plenty of sun
Rest, relaxation and quality time
Then in September
We ended in Houston, Texas
For a much needed escape
Great food and the Waterfall Park
Were just a few highlights
Until you drove countless hours to Atlanta, Georgia
For One Music Fest 2 day music festival
Sexxy Red was a no show
But GloRilla did her thing
We had a blast
Until the trip had to come to an end
Now it’s December
You are here at my side
As the holidays aren’t the same
I’m thankful we get to spend them together
As we both are missing our Moms
This is the best time of year
And the best moment of the year
Is truly you being with me
When all I need is your support
Going to see the tree
At Rockefeller center
Brought back the Christmas spark I’ve missed
So thank you Bae for being a part of making 2024 a blessing!Voting is closed
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This poem radiates love and appreciation! You provided vivid snapshots of the journey you took this year while also sharing what it means to you to have someone by your side. I love how you highlighted high and low moments, and then ended by sharing your gratitude for everything. Thank you for sharing!
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James/Maintain4life shared a letter in the
Surviving Addiction group 6 months agoThis post is viewable by the Unsealed community only.
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Benjamin Fuller shared a letter in the
Poetry group 6 months agoThree Brothers
Donald M. ClydeNarrator: Let me tell you a fable of three brothers, sitting and having a feast around a table:
Brother 1: Who is this God compared us three? Are we, His image, not better than He? Is not our greatness exposed for all of the world to see?
Brother 2: Yes my brother, I am inclined to agree. For I am an axe who is capable of felling any tree. Be it cedar, maple, or oak. No matter how tall or how small. All I need is a mighty hand to swing me, and I shall lower them all
Brother 3: Ah my foolish brother, you are nothing more than a brute, where as I myself am a beautiful flute. I’m the one people desire as they feast and they dine. The one they enjoy as they sip on their wine. All I need is someone to breathe through me, and I shall make a sound most divine.
Brother 1: Silly brother, who are you to try and pretend? For you know that to the heights of my glory you shall never ascend. For great as you are, of us three you are least. You shall not rise, as bread lacking yeast. Where as I am a well of knowledge, for I am a book. People have travelled far and wide just so upon me they may look. The information I contain has built kingdoms from dust, and left empires shook. I record all of that which I see, just so long I have an author to write within me.
Brother 2: Brothers now is not the time to argue about who is greatest and who is least, but let us sit together and enjoy our feast.
Brother 3: My brother you are right. This is not the time to argue, let us not fight, but rather let us lift up our glasses as I propose a toast. For we three brothers are the pinnacle for most.
Narrator: Fools! Who are you to arrogantly boast?
For You are but mere tools, who are useless unless you are used by your Master
And the works of your hands are doomed to collapse, as a wall built without mortar or plaster.
For you trust in knowledge, strength, and fame, looking to them for your power
But their power is fleeting, and they shall depart from you in your final hour
The works of your hands shall crumble to dust at times passing
But as for God, His work shall be everlasting
How can man hope to compare to the almighty God?
For He is the One who spoke forth the heavens and created the earth
He was the One who formed man from the dust, and was there when woman first gave birth.
He is the judge who shall pass forth our sentence
And the only One with the power to bring forth works of repentance.
You think that your glory shines so valiant, so bright
But in the wake of His glory, it shall appear as day, even in the darkest of night.
So raise up your glasses, and make ye your toast,
But as for me, it is in the Lord God I shall boast-
This is a beautiful poem. Have you ever performed spoken word before? I can see this piece being performed reading this gave me so much imagery with conversation between the three brothers. I really enjoyed reading the tone of this poem as well. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem!
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Thank you for your kind words!! I haven’t really done spoken word before. I mean I recorded a poem once like a year ago and put it online. But that’s about it.
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