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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 weeks, 4 days ago
Awww, this is so adorable! I love that you started this poem by making it seem like the perpetual storm was a curse or something you could never escape, then ending it by saying that you aren’t afraid of the storm. Rather than changing the storm entirely, they changed your outlook and emotions toward the storm, and I find that incredibly beautiful 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 weeks, 4 days ago
I really love the message behind your poem. You’re so right; we idolize things that lack importance and judge each other for the things that should matter, like standing up for what’s right. It’s beautiful to see that you’ve prioritized the sunrise and you’re starting to see life from beyond the lens we’re given 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I don’t know how to explain this, but you really captured the golden hue with your words. All of your lines really feel like they’re the color gold and they all fit very warmly together in the poem. There is a very soft and sweet tone to your piece and it perfectly captures the idea of a golden lullaby 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I love this reminder that unlimited time creates the space for eternal hope! I’d love to hear more about what inspired this piece and what eternal hope means to you 🙂
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Aw, this is so cute! I love how much you love yourself 🙂 We’re often tricked into thinking that outside factors determine how much we deserve love, but really the most important love comes from within ourselves <3 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
This is such a creative piece! It’s obvious you’re an artist by the way you write, it’s very creative and kind of all over the place in a very methodical and unified way (if that makes any sense). I can feel the beauty in your chaos and you communicated that perfectly in your poem. Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Wow, thank you for your words! It is incredibly validating to receive feedback like this and it truly enforces the love for one’s art 🥹 I appreciate it so much!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I LOVE this piece. You went from hiding yourself and avoiding where you’d stand out to fully stepping into yourself and appreciating your differences. I love that you ended this piece with yourself upon and throne, showing that you do stand out yet that’s the beauty of it. Really good work, thank you for sharing 🙂
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Aw, this poem is super cute! It’s short and sweet but left me feeling warm and your piece is a nice reminder that peace is everywhere. I love how your story starts immediately with the action of a bird flying because it’s easy to imagine and had me quickly curious as to where you’d go with it. Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Congratulations! It’s so wholesome to see all that people have overcome and I’m glad you’ve gotten to a place where you can look back and know that everything is going to be okay 🙂 I love the endless hype you give your younger self and the beauty that resides within struggle. Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Wow, this is such a good piece! When you said “What I would give to live a simple life again, When we were still in fact worried about time, Because curfew felt almost like a death sentence, And being late to dinner was our biggest crime” I felt that in my soul! I love how this is about so much more than a maple tree, but also about growing up and loss. I love how seamlessly you wove metaphors in while focusing on the tree in great detail. Excellent job! Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I love how you captured the anxieties of being a father! I love the shift between focusing on being a good father, to worry, to realizing you can be a good father by being a kid too. I also really like your use of literary devices, like saying, “The Sunlight was very jealous of our smiles.” All around, you brought a lot of creativity and sweetness to the table 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
This piece feels almost musical! It’s very animated and it commands attention. I love that the beach is such a tranquil space for you to the point where you can tune everything else out and fully connect with the nature around you. Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
You are absolutely right! We look for peace in the calm parts of life, but really peace is everywhere, especially in growth. I love the creativity in your words for example when you said, “I invented a new season for life” or “I could smell my own toxicity deeply rooted.” Your mind is clearly incredibly creative and I am so glad I had the honor of reading your work 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
This is SUCH a beautiful piece. If you didn’t say the word “Missouri” I would have never imagined that that is where you were describing. I love how you brought unimagined beauty to a place that is often overlooked by outsiders. Thank you so much for bringing so much beauty to this competition. Please keep writing 🙂 Your flow and rhymes are truly excellent.
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Aw, this is so cute! And the picture really ties it all together 🙂 It’s so beautiful that you have found a love so deep that it makes you want to turn your feelings into art. I really love the line, “I’m drowning in your ocean blue eyes”. The imagery made it easy to picture and added depth to your piece. Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I really like the way you formatted this piece. You build up your story and make me want to read more because of it. I love the line, “fear is merely a veil that hides the soul’s desires.” You start out this story with an element of anxiety that melts into calm serenity. I really like the journey you took me on in such a short amount of time. Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
This was so sweet! I love how you repeated “Ocean view, Oh ocean view”. This line helped provide natural breaks in your poem that gave it a little more life. I also love your use of literary devices like describing the wind kissing your skin or the water answering you back. Overall great job and thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you so much, the thoughts of this poem just came to me as I wrote. Literally freestyle lol.
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
This is such a cute poem 🙂 It’s so beautiful to see how you put your love on paper and turn your feelings into art. I love the amount of detail you use, it really helps paint a picture and take me on a journey as a reader. Thank you for sharing!
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Aww thank you for reading. I’m glad you like it!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
You have some really excellent rhymes in this piece! For example, I really liked the line, “It’s the Holy Bible-you know It’s instruction, The Path of Peace and Life from all destruction!”. I think you told your story in a very creative way and I like your use of exclamation marks to show your passion 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much Saga, I really needed to hear that! When someone can appreciate anything I ever write, it makes it worth the while to write, regardless of the experience it took to bring it about. I love everyone from my Unsealed family and think about everyone often. Thank you for being such a blessing in the lives of everyone your involved…read more
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 2 weeks, 2 days ago
This poem is so sweet and wholesome! I love how you explained all the different riches in your life from health, to money, to stability. I also really appreciate your use of imagery. It makes it very easy to put myself in your shoes and smell the apple pie and wet grass 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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