Your poem is so inspiring. Especially for raising the next generation of men. I have 2 boys and at the age of 2 their grand parents say he’s too big to be crying. At 2! It’s so frustrating. Yes they deserve flowers too. They deserve to show emotion without judgement.

I absolutely agree with you. Men deserve to be appreciated, acknowledged, and celebrated just as much as women do. The societal expectations and stereotypes placed on men often discourage vulnerability and emotional expression, which can have a negative impact on their well-being. It is important to create a more inclusive and compassionate…read more

I have always said it takes a tragedy to change people’s minds on what they believe. It’s always been that way. By the time they realize that they need to be the change it’s so bad that the pivot and walk the other way.

It seems like you’re expressing frustration and disillusionment with the state of the world and the information we are presented with. It can be disheartening when we discover that the people and institutions we once trusted are not always truthful or transparent. The issues you raise, such as government deceit, media manipulation, and the need…read more

lady jay I like this piece is it aiming for peace! What does the change ultimately look or feel like for you? What changes if any would you make within self to help achieve the goal? 🙂

This poem is so deep with meaning. I appreciate your words of wisdom with rhetorical questions. You are speaking the change. You are living the change. I see freedom from the chains!!

Change can come in various forms and often occurs through collective efforts and perseverance. While it may seem uncertain or even daunting, the desire for change is often fueled by the belief in a better future.

The cold chills from hearing Gandhis quote is because it’s speaking to your soul. You can feel it in your bones what you need to do. The chills is the body acknowledging the truth.

It sounds like you’re feeling overwhelmed by the state of the world and have a negative view of it. It’s understandable to feel that way at times, especially when bombarded with negative news and issues. However, it’s important to remember that there are still positive aspects and beautiful places in the world, as you mentioned.

Love is so sacred. I love the depth of your poem. “Sweet nothings, truly mean nothing.”
I resonated with that line the most. I feel we are often told many things verbally but without action. Thanks for your read Ama! 🙂

I hate to say it but in high school I had no idea what love was. My parents never showed me how to treat the man you love. It was nothing but yelling and cursing each other out. Now as a married woman i cherish love with all my might.

It seems like you’re expressing a sense of disillusionment and disappointment with the current state of love and relationships in society. It can be disheartening to witness a lack of genuine love, sincerity, and meaningful connections. It’s understandable to long for a world where love is more authentic, where people genuinely care for one…read more

Kale, I wished it were all as simple as you so wonderfully wrote in your letter. Exchanging the weapons for an act of gratitude and the homelessness situation under control would be ideal. I too agree EVEVRYONE should have a decent place to lay their heads. Great poem!

What you speak of is a utopian that I hope one day we can experience. I agree that every deserves a decent place to lay their head and a simple compliment can change someone’s day.

You’re absolutely right that changing the world can seem like a daunting task, especially when faced with the negative aspects and challenges that exist. It’s true that people have different perspectives, beliefs, and priorities, which can make it difficult to find common ground and work towards positive change.

Oh how lovely would our world be if all of this would just be. Your poem speaks of world peace and love and compassion. Thank you so much for sharing.

Your vision for a hopeful world is inspiring and captures the essence of a harmonious and inclusive society. It paints a picture of a world where compassion, respect, and understanding prevail. It’s a world where the well-being of our planet, its creatures, and all people is prioritized.

I love that you put your childhood perspective in this poem and followed up with what the world is and how we are in the midst of change. Thank you for sharing.

“The Change I See In Us” beautifully expresses a sense of longing for a world where harmony, empathy, and coexistence prevail. It acknowledges the current pain and challenges faced by many individuals, but also recognizes the resilience and power of people coming together to bring about positive change.

Wow. Your words speak so loudly. We are in the perfect position to change. We have no where to go buy up from here. Thank you so much for sharing.

Your words express a deep understanding of the struggles and injustices faced by individuals in society, particularly regarding gender roles, toxic family dynamics, and the lack of safe spaces for self-expression and vulnerability.

To live in a world Thai isn’t so digital. To have organic relations and conversations. To have true connections that isn’t through a screen. Thank you so much for sharing.

Your words beautifully express a longing for a different world, one that embraces genuine human connection, emotional growth, and a sense of peace within oneself. It’s understandable to yearn for a world where the fear of missed opportunities doesn’t hold us back and where the moments we cherish are tangible and lived fully.

This short poem speaks volumes on change. We are all just human. Being human unifies us we need to remember that. Thank you so much for sharing this poem. <3

In a world where there are countless individuals, it is true that each person’s change and growth are significant. We are all imperfect humans, prone to making mistakes and facing struggles. But it is essential to forgive ourselves and others, for forgiveness allows us to move forward and remember the inherent value in every person.