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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 3 days ago
This is such a sweet piece. It’s really wonderful to know people have such wonderful relationships with their families, and I’m glad you shared your story with us! I especially love the ending of your story, the last four lines really wrapped this piece up very nicely 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 3 days ago
Thank you so much for sharing! As a “youngster”, this was really nice to hear 🙂 I loved hearing you talk about how God is love. This is a beautiful reminder to find God within us and give ourselves grace! Love and light to you <3
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 3 days ago
Thank you so much for sharing your story! I love your transparency; mental health isn’t talked about enough and it’s really important that we provide each other with safe spaces to share how we feel. You did a great job balancing a bleak topic with a lighthearted outlook. Great job!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 3 days ago
Wow, what a beautiful story! You did an excellent job of telling a clear and engaging story. I’m even feeling a little emotional! As someone who struggled in school, I can relate to all the feelings of doubt and it’s beautiful to see you understanding your children in a deep way and being able to make sure they don’t have to go through the same thing you did 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 3 days ago
I love how much detail you put into this piece! You really put me in your head as a reader from helping your mom as a kid to fast food to retail and everything else on your journey. Your piece sounds very bright and uplifting and I love how conversational it feels! Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
I love hearing pieces about mental health because it’s really important for us to shine a light on underrepresented communities! You painted the picture of your experience really clearly and I want to commend you for it. It’s wonderful that you found an outlet for your emotions and I encourage you to keep writing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
It’s so wonderful that you never gave up and found your path! I also really want to help people so I feel connected to this piece. It’s so wholesome that you turned your journey into art 🙂 Keep writing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
I love the journey that you took me on! I feel like I can see your childhood self on that stage and feeling discouraged yet also rising up and reclaimng your craft. I’m so glad you kept writing, this was great to read!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
I love the emphasis of YOU throughout this piece. It really connects me as a reader as I see myself in every line you’re writing. As I read this out loud, I really like the way it flows together and I feel uplifted! Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
This piece hits hard from the jump! “I was in crisis feeling lifeless, but that didn’t mean that I loved life less. I just know I had to pass life’s test.” hit so hard that I had go back and read it again. This is excellent! You have a very smooth flow and packed a lot into a very short poem 🙂 Good job!
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Thank you,
I appreciate the feedback. I’m glad you liked it. I hope hit helps others especially during Mental Health Awareness Month.Write me back Subscribe  or  log in to reply
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
Thank you for teaching me what a dizain poem is! You did an excellent job with the structure and flow of this piece 🙂 This is such a simple and sweet reminder to continue pushing. Thank you for sharing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
I love the comparison of opposites! Thank you for the reminder that two “opposites” can both exist at the same time like peace and pain or weakness and strength. Great concept for a poem, keep writing!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
Your metaphors and imagery are AMAZING. I read, “I fought for innocence to remain the outfit we could still wear,” and audibly gasped. I can see your story so cleary and feel everything you’re writing so deeply. This is wonderful work!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
My first reaction was also “wow”. I can’t imagine how difficult it must be to go through something as life-changing as a fire. It’s really incredible for you to take this experience and see the beauty in it while also using it to create! Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you Saga it was such a trying time and it wasn’t until now that I found the need to write about it… I appreciate you taking the time to read it and provide feedback thank you 🤗
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 4 days ago
This is a beautiful story. I love the simplicity and the vague element to it. I really feel like I’m reading between the lines and soaking up a story within a story. It takes a special skill to move someone with little detail, and you do that really well here! Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 1 weeks, 6 days ago
You’re so welcome 🙂 And you too!!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 2 weeks, 1 days ago
I’m so glad you found your passion! I, too, have dozens of half-done projects and half-baked dreams, so I understand the joy that comes from finding the thing that makes you want to commit despite your nature. I’ve been an artist for YEARS and only just made the first thing I truly thought was “good” a couple weeks ago. This is a beautiful reminder that the joy is in the journey, and I’m proud of you for rowing your own boat 🙂 You’re an excellent writer; don’t quit on this, either!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 2 weeks, 1 days ago
You are a GODDESS. Nail license? Musician? Writer? AND managing five entities? You’re really doing it all!! Thank you so much for sharing your story with the world and inspiring us not to give up 🙂 keep writing!
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Gratitude!💙 I thank you kindly for your encouraging words and the support to keep writing and sharing! May you be well!
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You’re so welcome 🙂 And you too!!
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 2 weeks, 1 days ago
You are such a great writer! I really like the way you told this story; I felt like I was face down on the concrete with you. You made it very easy for the reader to see this story come to life in their head and I want to celebrate you for that! Excellent job 🙂
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Saga Foss responded to a letter in topic Write about a time you didn’t give up 2 weeks, 1 days ago
Hi! This is BEAUTIFULLY written. You crafted an excellent flow and this was super warm to read! I love the line where you said “the mosaic of brokenness”. I really love the way you celebrate being broken and find the beauty in it! I’m beautifully broken too 🙂
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