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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Magical Moments 1 years, 7 months ago
Please for give the grammatical errors in my little prologue…I was so excited to post from my phone, that I didn’t even proofread! Is there a way to edit posts? Oh well…I’ll slow down next time 🙂
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Parenting group 1 years, 7 months ago
ABSOLUTELY YOU
Dear Unsealers,
I wrote this poem for my son during a very difficult time last year when he was suffering from depression and suicidal thoughts. Luckily my ex-wife and I (over-re)acted quickly and sought him counseling and medical treatment. Thankfully, today he is stable and thriving in his first year of college…but I will always be vigilant of the signs should they manifest again. I guess the moral of my take is to be vigilant of your child’s mental health and to not be afraid to go overboard with seeking professional help for them. False alarms are better than emergency sirens.
ABSOLUTELY YOU.
My infinite sadness
Is the thought of losing you
Never has a feeling
Been so absolute
Forever is a long time
To grieve, to mourn, to cry
But never do I ever
Want to say goodbye
Though life’s a little hard right now
And my happiness minute
Know absolutely nothing ever
Keeps me from loving you
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Poetry group 1 years, 7 months ago
FLOWER ME
I have roses on my tongue
Velvet kisses, words with thorns
I have magnolias in my eyes
Silver petals that mesmerize
Orange blossoms on my chest
Cover my heart with their zest
I have orchids for my navel
Like a sprite from woodland fable
Through my waist and far below
Hidden garden with its glow
My body, vase of stems and leaves
Ivy wrapped around my knees
Small bouquet of scent and wonder
Arranged for all to gaze and ponder
Tend my garden, see me grow
Water daily, let it flow
Then pick my flowers with delight
For they’ll come back throughout the night
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Hello Ricardo,
Your writing is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.Shelley
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Thank you Shelly! I had fun writing this one and was inspired by a school art project my son did where he had to make a collage portrait using images of flowers and fruit. LOL. He did a great job.
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I love this so much! The rhythm is upbeat and enjoyable and your words paint a beautiful picture. This is wonderful and thank you so much for this ❤️
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Thank you, Maggie. I appreciate your kind response.
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Magical Moments group 1 years, 7 months ago
AIRBORNE
Dear Unsealers,
I wrote this on the tarmac of my local airport as I witnessed my 16 year old son take his first solo flight. He didn’t even have a drivers license, yet he strapped into the cockpit of a single engine plane and piloting towards the runway. I felt helpless, proud, scared to death, and wanting to run behind his plane all at once. After what felt like a heart stopping forever, he skillfully landed the plane and taxied in. This moment will always be surreal and magical for me.
AIRBORNE
You sail across the mid-day sky
The wind upon my sullen face
You climb to heights unseen
I feel weightless
Like a feather tossed along by the playful wind
My mind is blank, like sterile moonlight
Your heart is warm, like the velvety morning sun
I feel helpless and hopeful
You are falling, drifting, gliding across the open horizon
I can move and love, freely
You can feel all of Earth beneath your unmarred feet
I hold the Universe across my fragile shoulders
And the silence roars into my ears
Along with the bristling of my every hair
The windy tears dry upon my sunburnt cheeks
You are weightless, drifting, soaring
And after seconds that seem like fragments of eternity
Gently, you land, into my embrace
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Please for give the grammatical errors in my little prologue…I was so excited to post from my phone, that I didn’t even proofread! Is there a way to edit posts? Oh well…I’ll slow down next time 🙂
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Women's Empowerment group 1 years, 7 months ago
BEAUTIFUL SOUL
Outward beauty is fleeting
Taken away by the years
Like waves brushing sand back into the sea
But a beautiful souls never fades
It shines brighter, like a perennial diamond, as the years progress
When our outward mask fades away
The beautiful soul can be seen, fully, in all its splendor
Why do we confuse physical beauty with permanence,
When we know full well its ephemeral nature?
Why not, instead, seek to make ourselves beautiful on the inside,
And have that live forever?
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Ricardo, your letter is amazing! It’s a reminder to look beyond appearances and value the qualities that truly define a person. Let us strive to develop inner beauty, for that is what truly lasts and leaves a lasting effect. Your words inspire us to focus on personal growth and the beauty that shines from within.
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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Mental Health 1 years, 7 months ago
I am doing well! Thank you for your empathy and compassion, Shelly.
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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Parenting 1 years, 7 months ago
Thank you. She has always been an artist. Graduated this year from Pratt in NYC…<3
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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Parenting 1 years, 7 months ago
My daughter is now 22 and my son recently turned 19…but I still see them as 12 and 9…*sigh…Thank you for your response.
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Poetry group 1 years, 7 months ago
JUSTICE SUPREME
Bias is the crime scene
Authenticity is the crime
Ignorance is enforcement
Non-conformance is the charge
Guilty is the plea
Happiness is the defense
Bigotry is the jury
Hypocrisy is the judge
Hate is the sentence
Fear is the prison guard
Rejection is the warden
Courage is the appeal
Tolerance is probation
Empathy is the bill
Compassion is the vote
Acceptance is the law
Love is supreme justice
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Dear Justice,
What clever words you have written and so very true. Thank you forypour wisdom.Shelley
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Thank you, Shelly. I appreciate your comment.
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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Parenting 1 years, 7 months ago
Wow. So spot on its a relief to read and know that others have felt the same emotions and asked the same questions as myself. Thank you for posting this.
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Parenting group 1 years, 7 months ago
PATER
I am a grateful father
More importantly, parent
Through a gift that was God sent
Delivered by a mother
Time slips by without notice
Photos to remind my soul
Of a sacrifice untold
They grow from bud to lotus
And now my grey reminds me
Of broken bones and scraped knees
Diapers, prom, college degrees
Protect them to set them free
Now I sit to reminisce
Wishing I had done better
As my heart writes this letter
Of those early years I miss
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Hello Ricardo,
I can really relate to your words as a mother of 2 grown children. Those days when they were little and they were with me 24/7 were wonderful!Shelley
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My daughter is now 22 and my son recently turned 19…but I still see them as 12 and 9…*sigh…Thank you for your response.
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Parenting group 1 years, 7 months ago
MY ARTIST
My daughter is watercolor song
A blend of oil paint, chalk, and pencil
A free-form work without a stencil
A collage of talent, pure and strong
Her beauty draws you from the start
Deep chestnut hair to aqua eyes
Her humor takes you by surprise
I know, in life, she’ll leave her mark
Her passion flows from deep inside
Her portrait, brushstrokes from her heart
And all she does, a work of art
A masterpiece that gives me pride
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Hi Ricardo,
Your daughter sounds beautiful. I know you treasure her.
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Thank you. She has always been an artist. Graduated this year from Pratt in NYC…<3
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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Parenting 1 years, 7 months ago
Thank you, Shelly! I will post one on my daughter shortly.
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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Parenting 1 years, 7 months ago
Thank you, again, Lauren. My son is such a beautiful, gentle soul. He also, unfortunately, inherited a propensity for depression and anxiety. Thankfully, he is doing well and flourishing today. I also wrote a similar poem for my daughter, which I will post shortly. The last two years I wrote hundreds of poems as a way to manage my coming out as gay and a divorce after 23 years of marriage. It has been incredibly therapeutic for me.
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gorilladna responded to a letter in topic Mental Health 1 years, 7 months ago
Thank you, Lauren. Your response made me cry, because I wrote this at a very difficult time in my life. The picture is of my little buddie, Tango Bleu. He, and writing poetry therapeutically, saved me from my darkest moments. I really appreciate your acknowledgement and response.
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Parenting group 1 years, 8 months ago
RELATIVE TREES
Relative Trees
My son is strong, a young oak tree
His leaves move gently in the breeze
His shadow calms, puts me at ease
He is the tree I wish to be
My tree is rugged, rough, and torn
Life’s left it’s mark, my bark is worn
Leaves have fallen; my shade, forlorn
I’m not the tree that I was born
My son’s long branches reach the sky
Grows and flowers as birds come by
Watch in wonder and start to cry
As he bears fruit for passersby
My roots will keep his soil intact
And block the wind upon his back
And when the Man comes with His axe
I’ll be the one that He will hack
My son’s tree will live long and free
And he will bloom majestically
My stump will keep him company
Under his shade is where I’ll be
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awww this is so incredibly sweet. I hope having your son’s back, and seeing all of his wonder, reminds you of your own power and greatness. Don’t let the hardships in life ever weigh down your “branches.” This poem is truly beautiful. your son is lucky to have you. Also, want to share this with @rickwrites — feel like he’d appreciate this piece!
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Thank you, again, Lauren. My son is such a beautiful, gentle soul. He also, unfortunately, inherited a propensity for depression and anxiety. Thankfully, he is doing well and flourishing today. I also wrote a similar poem for my daughter, which I will post shortly. The last two years I wrote hundreds of poems as a way to manage my coming out as…read more
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Hello Ricardo,
Your son must be an amazing person. You poem really honors him. Very sweet.Shelley
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Thank you, Shelly! I will post one on my daughter shortly.
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Hi Ricardo,
Your son sounds wonderful as well.Shelley
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gorilladna shared a letter in the
Mental Health group 1 years, 8 months ago
LONELINESS
Loneliness, a friend of mine
They keep me company, they take my time
They visit often and stay too long
They whisper dark things, sing sad songs
They drink along and share my glass
Thus wishing that our time won’t pass
Loneliness, the jealous type
They shun the social scene and hype
Prefers to keep me in my room
To make my mind a heavy tomb
Of grey-scale thoughts, of shadowed dreams
And feed me lethargy in reams
If I reach out or you reach in
My friend’s departure will begin
And pull me to the Sun and light
They’re only gone when when you’re in sight
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First off, I love the picture of the dog. Secondly, this poem is really powerful and deep. I think the magic of writing is that when you feel alone, your writing, your mind, can keep you company. Thank you for sharing <3 Lauren
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Thank you, Lauren. Your response made me cry, because I wrote this at a very difficult time in my life. The picture is of my little buddie, Tango Bleu. He, and writing poetry therapeutically, saved me from my darkest moments. I really appreciate your acknowledgement and response.
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Hello Ricardo,
I truly hope you are not lonely now. I hope we can stay connected thru The Unsealed. You have a community of friends here.Shelley
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I am doing well! Thank you for your empathy and compassion, Shelly.
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gorilladna submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to your ideal self 1 years, 8 months ago
CURE
I’ve prayed for a cure to this horrid disease
Of loving someone without loving me
Is this a choice or a mental disorder?
My pain is a chasm, I’ve stood on its border
If I can’t love freely, then why love at all?
Is there a cure or an ultimate fall?
Society speaks, but where is my voice?
Why would I suffer if given a choice?
It’s how I was born, it’s not my fault
A wound that is raw and covered in salt
I’m imperfectly perfect with nothing to fix
Why not accept me and love me as is?
Some say it’s wrong and abhorred by nature
But can love be wrong, and is that my wager?
What are the stakes of swimming upstream?
Not choosing convention and living my dream?
Giving up peace, a love, happiness?
Living a life of turmoil and mess?
So examine yourself, don’t diagnose me
Do you think you are normal, perfect and free?
I pick to be “sick, distorted, and ill”
For that is my choice which comes from free will
The sickness is yours and not mine at all
I’m perfectly splendid, I’ll fly and not fall
Voting is closed
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Ricardo!!!! This line is everything!! “The sickness is yours and not mine at all
I’m perfectly splendid, I’ll fly and not fall”
Keep flying. Be who you are. Do what makes you happy. I have something I call a Circle of Peace. You disrupt my peace, you leave the circle. Anyone who has a problem with who you love or how you love should be rem…read more
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Thank you so much, Lauren. This was one of the first poems I had ever written as I struggled with coming out. Self-acceptance is something we all battle, but I realized it’s not me (us/anyone) that needs changing…it’s the outside world’s views that need adjustment. All anyone wants is simple acceptance. ❤️
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