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vega submitted a contest entry to
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nyshacamilo submitted a contest entry to
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Mi Abuelita
The beach is my favorite place
I walk to the farthest end
You know, where all the jagged rocks meet
All pointy and eroding from the storms the sky sends
I climb those rocks until I find the perfect bench
I sit down to look at my viewMy grandmother’s favorite beach is called Coco Beach
It’s in Florida, her favorite stateI imagine there’s coconuts everywhere
You have to keep your head held high so you can keep watchWAIT
That same line can be used for life
Anyways
My Lela and I sit on those rocks together
We watch the sunset
It goes from pretty blues and whites to a beautiful cotton candy sunset
The wind is the perfect temperature, the perfect strengthWe take deep breaths together
So deep we taste the salt from the oceanWe name things we see in the stars
I update her on every detail of my life since she left
We laugh
We cry
We curse
We yell at the skyI tell her my new memories, the ones she knew I didn’t remember
I tell her my new perspectives of the world, of my life
I show her all my wounds in my back from everyone who swore to me they loved meShe gives me a massage
I feel the familiar feel of her gentle hands
I feel all the love through them
My eyes tear because I missed that feeling so muchThe sky is turning orange now, light slowly rising up
The winds start picking up
Lela grabs my face so firmly but still so gentle
She squeezes and says to me, into me“I am so beyond proud of you. Your wounds are nothing but warrior scars now. Symbols of battles you won. Reminders of all you can withstand. Now go fight some more, you may fall or slip, but you have proven to always to get back up.”
After the warmest, tightest hug she disappears into the big rush of wind
7 seconds I stand there
Embracing the last bits of her presenceNow I’m awake, my eyes crusty from tears
But my heart is so full and warm with hope and love for life
So heavy
But also so so full
And my soul is at peaceVoting is closed
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This is such a wonderful piece! You took me on a journey; every line left me wanting more. I love it when writers tell us a story and use natural avenues to get us to the point without spoon-feeding it to us. Thank you so much for sharing, this truly was beautiful to read 🙂
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I’m so happy you enjoyed this piece as it is one of my favorite pieces. Thank you for your kind words. 💕
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maimotif submitted a contest entry to
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gloria-gallegos submitted a contest entry to
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lorinda submitted a contest entry to
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Peace in Pieces
I find my peace in pieces
A little here and there
Chaos never ceases
Peace is often rareBut,
I feel it in raindrops
Dry, falling leaves
Carefree belly flops
A humorous sneezeIn,
Pine needle covered trails
A brilliant sunrise
Stylish manicured nails
Crisp sweet potato friesAt,
Book clubs with friends
Pride parades in June
Multicolored pens
Naps in the afternoonI find my peace in pieces
Wherever there is spare
Gather then release it
Peace is meant to shareVoting is closed
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YESSS. I audibly yelled aloud and sat up in my chair when I read the first line. Why am I tearing up? This poem is absolutely beautiful. I LOVE the line “I find my peace in pieces”. That’s such a creative way to spin the prompt and I heavily relate to finding peace in pieces of everything 🙂 Excellent work!
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wow, thank you so much for this! What encouragement 🙂
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opwriter submitted a contest entry to
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Latte's & Monday's Don't Bring Me Down
Dear Unsealers,
This is my answer to the question in the challenge…
When and where do I feel most at peace?
As the sun rises over the Canyon of Heroes
It’s the start of the work weekBut before I arrive at the office
There’s something that I need to do
The Monday morning ritualAs I take my seat in the cafe at 4 Liberty Street
I see the heart in my Matcha LatteAt the first sip, the world stands still
Only the daylight can be seenNone of the world’s troubles matter
With each extra sip, I feel warmed blissWhen the bottom of the cup is reached
I can take on the slings and arrows of the dayVoting is closed
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Aw, this is such a cute little poem. I love how you took a seemingly mundane task and filled it with beauty and emotion. I love that you can find peace in something so small 🙂 That takes a special skill that only the most resilient have. Thank you for sharing!
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sherno87 submitted a contest entry to
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tionna submitted a contest entry to
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my definition of peace
peace, the peace that’s so so very sweet
and lovely filled with incredible
nature beings such as the birds
the bumbles bees lady bugs, caterpillars,
and even things we could hardly
ever seepeace, the peace that you’re
mind is so free and at ease the
freedom you have without
over thinking, under thinking
with such anxiety till
the point where you could
hardly take a moment and even breathepeace, I want the peace that comes
with happiness, excitement, joy,
and laughter filled
with friends and family
till the point where sadness or
drama isn’t included or even such a thingpeace, the peace
from the moment that
i wake up or even go to sleep
negativity isn’t even a
thought or thing keeping me
from my everyday things
that would escape me
from my positive realitypeace, the peace
where privacy, calmness
quietness, isolation isn’t a
bad thing just being able
to enjoy life without all
the unnecessary noise
and irritation that will
disturb mepeace, the peace
that’s so light and pretty
like the sky filled with
many clouds on a hot
sunny warm day when
taking a swim is almost
perfect
for that specific daypeace, the peace
where life is like
the ocean floating
and the waves
maneuvering so
smoothly and perfectly
sounding where that’s
all I want to hear and
just seepeace
peace
is all I want in life
and may ever needVoting is closed
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I love the structure and format of your poem! You really emphasized that this is a poem about peace, and your words are laced with beauty. I loved when you said, “Where privacy, calmness, quietness, isolation isn’t a bad thing.” Too often, we place negativity on the slow components of life when really these are opportunities for great peace 🙂 T…read more
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Aww!! Wow! Thank you so much ❤️ i appreciate you
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It seems like you really understand what matters in life, and you lean into those things. I also agree with Saga! I love how you structured this piece. I felt more peaceful just reading it. Thank you for sharing.<3 Lauren
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No problem!! Wow, I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much. You’re greatly appreciated
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krissiestina submitted a contest entry to
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The Soul's Haven
Beneath the radiant sun,
Waves crash nearby,
The chilled water beckons to me,
As sand clings to my feet.Seagulls dance and flutter about,
While dolphins playfully surface.
Sandcastles tower amidst the sand,
Children’s joyous laughter fills the air.An oasis of tranquility,
Salt air whispers gently.
This is my favorite place,
A haven for the soul.Sereneness,
Peacefulness,
Endless horizon,
This is pure bliss.As the waves come and go,
Renewal washes over me,
In the vast ocean’s expanse,
All problems fade away.Drifting with the current,
Worries are no more,
This sanctuary revives and rejuvenates,
The beach: my happy place.Voting is closed
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I LOVE your use of imagery. You put the reader in your shoes with this piece, and I can vividly imagine the picture you’re painting. I feel the itch of the sand on my feet, and I can feel the fire of the sun beaming on me as I read 🙂 Great job and thank you for sharing
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I love how you wrote that waves come and go, and renewal washes over you. It really connects the image of the beach and its impact on your peace. This is super creative. Thank you for sharing. <3 Lauren
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leximae submitted a contest entry to
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The Space
The impact of my Romeo’s embrace
can send ease throughout the mind—
compiling a space of security.
Shockwaves sent within
outside leaves only a grin—
the impact of my Romeo’s embrace.
Allowing the spirit to roam free
across the buds that have been planted—
compiling a space of security.
Growing in the races
tangling up the two souls—
the impact of my Romeo’s embrace.
Following the direction the fingers intertwine
as we head towards the meadows—
compiling a space of security.
A path sent from the rain
only he knows the pain we with-stained:
the impact of my Romeo’s embrace—
compiling a space of security.Voting is closed
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Awww, this piece is absolutely adorable. I love your use of repetition, like “compiling a space of security” and “my Romeo’s embrace”. It really helped emphasize the overall theme of your story and made it very easy to understand 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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unwritten_ties submitted a contest entry to
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