Thank you. I know we all fall into a pit of despair, and yet writing is like my resurrection to a better perspective. I like to see new ways of expressing myself and building that bind of wisdom
I believe that your writing will evolve and grow. I believe that if you keep going with your poetry you’ll be an amazing writer. Just follow your heart and I’m sure it will work out for you.
"Language of Love: Feasting on the Black Beauty of Seasons"
Behold the celestial canvas above, strewn with the starry gems of our dreams, shimmering in the darkness like a black velvet cloak. Such is the beauty that captivates our gaze, and as we reach out to touch it, we are blessed with the manifestation of love.
The touch of language, like a soft caress, weaves a tapestry of words that paints a picture…read more
Rashan, I feel like this poem is such a wonderful reflection of your ability to see what really matters and what really makes people and the world beautiful. Thank you for sharing!!! <3 Lauren
I believe that your writing will evolve and grow. I believe that if you keep going with your poetry you’ll be an amazing writer. Just follow your heart and I’m sure it will work out for you.
I appreciate you and the time you took to respond and send positive energy to me. Thank you and yes it was very hard but I know she is watching over me every day.
Embracing Change: Pondering Personal Evolution and Striving for Growth
Dear America,
As Friday unfurls its grandeur upon us, let us take a moment to ponder our personal evolution. Have we shed the skin of our former selves to embody a better version of us? Or are we stuck in the mire of the familiar, resisting the clarion call to change and swimming in the stagnation of the past?
This is anazing… I’m lost for words and I don’t know where to start. I have never read something so mesmerizing and detailed like this before… Like it’s written down to a science, complex yet easy to understand (for me).
Great words to ponder. We must shine a light on all that we do going forward. Embrace the good things you do, and learn form the wrong or mistaken things you go through.
This is absolutely beautiful!!! I love it! I love how you ended it. It was so powerful and so wise. “For in the chaos, we will find
A design that leaves us breathless and aligned.” This is so true. Thank you for sharing! <3 Lauren
Nicely said. Life is full of surprises and unexpected moments. It’s a beautiful chaos that never stops. This is such a wise take on life. A painting that is constantly changing. Thank you for sharing.
I believe this too. Life can be so unpredictable and can hit you with problems that make you think it’s impossible to get through. My favorite line in this poem by far is ” we see the extraordinary in the ordinary” well said indeed.
Sometimes I feel drained and weary,
Having taken on the mantle of Christ.
But what if I’m the antichrist, truly?
I worry about my actions,
And whether my attempts to heal
Are just a self-deception.
Perhaps I’m crucifying myself
By thinking I can show others the way.
Am I doing more harm than good?
Are my efforts misguided?
Or can I guide them…read more
God sees you. The devil will pour doubt into your mind. Don’t loose faith in the work you’re doing. Even on our darkest days the light still peaks through. Sending prayers for clarity and wisdom.
Thank you. I know we all fall into a pit of despair, and yet writing is like my resurrection to a better perspective. I like to see new ways of expressing myself and building that bind of wisdom
Advice to My Teenage Self: Finding Purpose, Building Confidence, and Navigating Life's Challenges
Dear Younger Self,
I hope this letter finds you well. As you navigate through your teenage years, I want to share some advice that I wish I had known at your age.
First, I urge you to focus on finding your purpose in life. It’s easy to get caught up in the day-to-day activities and distractions of teenage life, but it’s important to take some…read more
Rising Above Tragedy: A Letter of Resilience and Solidarity for Ralph Yarl
Dear Ralph,
I am writing to you today with a heart that is heavy with sadness and a mind that is filled with outrage. The news of your shooting has shaken me to my core, and I cannot imagine the pain and trauma that you and your loved ones are going through.
It is as if a storm has descended upon you, a storm that you did not see coming and were…read more
Unexpected Wisdom: How a Stranger's Story Changed My Perspective
Dear Stranger,
I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to take a moment to thank you for the positive impact that you have had on my life. Our deep conversation while playing Viking chess was truly enlightening, and the wisdom that you shared with me about life, love, being a man, and the hard work that it takes to receive blessings has…read more
As you continue to grow and thrive, remember that you, too, have the power to inspire others through your actions and beliefs. May your inner light shine bright, guiding you towards a future filled with love, success, and happiness.
😍 I have healed a lot since then gone to therapy to understand and speak about my feelings and grow from them. I even started a business with my daughters name so she can always be here with me.
Thank you 😊 I always thought I lack the ability to be a writer. It was something I always had trouble with so i strayed away from it. Now I feel a sense of relief and comfort when I write💯
You know my high school English teacher told me I couldn’t write either. I truly believe anyone who has a heart can write a good story. You ARE writer and a good one at that!
Thank you for enjoying and adding to the poem with engaging words and positivity I appreciate it a lot. And I love the quote a lot making me think of something else to write 💯
Whispers from the Ether: Illuminating the Path of the Seeker
As the winds of change test our patience,
And shatter the molds of our momentum,
We must find the courage to move forward,
And embark on our journey through time.
May we embrace the challenges ahead,
And learn from the lessons they impart,
For every obstacle we overcome,
Brings us closer to our desired endpoint.
Someone once said to me, “We may not move on, but we must move forward.” I think sometimes our past stays with us but we can’t let it stop us from continuing to live and move forward. This poem is so strong and so inspiring. Thank you for sharing. <3 Lauren
Thank you for enjoying and adding to the poem with engaging words and positivity I appreciate it a lot. And I love the quote a lot making me think of something else to write 💯
My father use to say “adapt and overcome”. He would say that every time we would move to a new place. My life changed with the wind often. Sometimes the best part about life is the consistent ebb and flow. Thank you for sharing your outlook on life.
We must find the courage to move on indeed. What you’ve said in this poem resonates with me on the deepest of levels. Navigating the part of like can be very very hard. But this is an amazing read.
Thank you for your kind words and understanding. It’s true that we all face challenges and regrets in life, but it’s important to learn from them and grow. Your empathy means a lot to me.
It can be helpful to remember that we are not alone in our struggles. Many people have faced similar challenges and have found ways to overcome them. It’s…read more
Wow!! This poem is a amazing. I am a big believer that strength is revealed in hard time and change comes from a desire and determination within. This is a really well-written and wise piece. I love it!
Thank you 😊 I always thought I lack the ability to be a writer. It was something I always had trouble with so i strayed away from it. Now I feel a sense of relief and comfort when I write💯
You know my high school English teacher told me I couldn’t write either. I truly believe anyone who has a heart can write a good story. You ARE writer and a good one at that!
An Apology to My Unborn Daughter: Reflections on Loss, Pain, and Regret
Dear precious daughter,
I am writing this letter to you with a heavy heart, as I never got the chance to hold you in my arms and tell you how much I love you. You were taken away from us too soon, and it has been a source of immense pain for me and your mother ever since.
I want to apologize to you for not being there for your mother after we…read more
I’m so sorry that you lost your daughter Rashan. I’m sure that must have been very hard for you. Sometimes in life we go through a lot of suffering wondering why things happen. I’m glad you were able to learn from your regrets and build yourself up for the future. We aren’t perfect but we learn from our past.
Thank you for your kind words and understanding. It’s true that we all face challenges and regrets in life, but it’s important to learn from them and grow. Your empathy means a lot to me.
It can be helpful to remember that we are not alone in our struggles. Many people have faced similar challenges and have found ways to overcome them. It’s…read more
Awww Rashan, I am sending you the absolute biggest hug. You need to forgive yourself. When people experience trauma like that it’s so hard for us to process that sometimes we don’t always deal with it in the best way possible, but it’s our brains just trying to protect ourselves from the immense pain. You clearly have a big and kind heart. So, be…read more
😍 I have healed a lot since then gone to therapy to understand and speak about my feelings and grow from them. I even started a business with my daughters name so she can always be here with me.
I’m so sorry for your loss. I can’t imagine what that must have been like for you. God sends us signs when we need it most. I’m so glad that you have learned from your past experiences as far as being there for the ones you love goes. Losing someone you love brings great grief but loving and supporting those affected brings great healing. Gods speed.
I appreciate you and the time you took to respond and send positive energy to me. Thank you and yes it was very hard but I know she is watching over me every day.
I know that this letter is a cry for help and a plea for answers. Since seeking help through therapy these are the questions I have for you and hope when this reach you that they can be answered. I just want to know if I’m still here, if I’m still alive, and if I’m still fighting the same battles. I want to know if I’m still trying…read more
Rashan, This piece is so powerful. You are clearly doing everything you can to heal and empower yourself and live your best life, not only for yourself but also for others. As for having more answers, I believe we may not always have all the answers we want, but we already have all the answers we need. Keep growing. Keep healing. And never lose…read more
Please know that your love, pride, and belief in your future self will be cherished. Your future self will most definitely be grateful for the support and encouragement you have shown. And as your future self continues on their journey, they will carry these words, reminding them of the strength and resilience that resides within.