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  • iambrizei shared a letter in the Group logo of PoetryPoetry group 1 years, 8 months ago

    Karmic Lesson

    That section I call karma which is part of the circle of life
    Had I’d known that I definitely would’ve thought twice
    Walking away to not say things you don’t meant out of anger is best
    When you reap what you sow it’s the infinite test
    As a child learning the 10 commandments is just 1 that does it for me
    Honor thy mother and father and everything else happens as it should be

    iambrizei

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    • Hi, I thought your poem was beautiful and I truly enjoyed reading it. I thought your word choice was perfect and everything fit so well together. Most importantly I loved the message of your poem. It really made me think about how important our actions truly are and how almost everything we do will somehow impact another person. It also reminded me of the saying put yourself in their shoes. If it was you that had to deal with the consequences of your actions instead of another person would you still do them? I loved your poem because it really made me think about my own life and how my actions can impact other people. Thank you for sharing!

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