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tionna submitted a contest entry to
Write A poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years, 1 months ago
my definition of peace
peace, the peace that’s so so very sweet
and lovely filled with incredible
nature beings such as the birds
the bumbles bees lady bugs, caterpillars,
and even things we could hardly
ever seepeace, the peace that you’re
mind is so free and at ease the
freedom you have without
over thinking, under thinking
with such anxiety till
the point where you could
hardly take a moment and even breathepeace, I want the peace that comes
with happiness, excitement, joy,
and laughter filled
with friends and family
till the point where sadness or
drama isn’t included or even such a thingpeace, the peace
from the moment that
i wake up or even go to sleep
negativity isn’t even a
thought or thing keeping me
from my everyday things
that would escape me
from my positive realitypeace, the peace
where privacy, calmness
quietness, isolation isn’t a
bad thing just being able
to enjoy life without all
the unnecessary noise
and irritation that will
disturb mepeace, the peace
that’s so light and pretty
like the sky filled with
many clouds on a hot
sunny warm day when
taking a swim is almost
perfect
for that specific daypeace, the peace
where life is like
the ocean floating
and the waves
maneuvering so
smoothly and perfectly
sounding where that’s
all I want to hear and
just seepeace
peace
is all I want in life
and may ever needVoting is closed
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I love the structure and format of your poem! You really emphasized that this is a poem about peace, and your words are laced with beauty. I loved when you said, “Where privacy, calmness, quietness, isolation isn’t a bad thing.” Too often, we place negativity on the slow components of life when really these are opportunities for great peace 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Aww!! Wow! Thank you so much ❤️ i appreciate you
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It seems like you really understand what matters in life, and you lean into those things. I also agree with Saga! I love how you structured this piece. I felt more peaceful just reading it. Thank you for sharing.<3 Lauren
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No problem!! Wow, I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much. You’re greatly appreciated
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