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tenacitywolff submitted a contest entry to Write about a time you didn’t give up 2 months ago
That Time I Didn't Give Up
That Time I didn’t give up.
I was in crisis feeling lifeless, but that didn’t mean that I loved life less. I just know I had to pass life’s test.
I had more blessings to go in my cup.
I had so much love.
Which is why I’m grateful for that time that I didn’t give up.
That time I didn’t give up.
Let me count the ways.
I gotta give God Praise.
I cherish my life that can’t be erased.
Remember you are strong and you are more than enough.
This life is so crazy rough.
Which is why I’m grateful for that time I didn’t give up.Voting starts May 16, 2024 12:00am
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This piece hits hard from the jump! “I was in crisis feeling lifeless, but that didn’t mean that I loved life less. I just know I had to pass life’s test.” hit so hard that I had go back and read it again. This is excellent! You have a very smooth flow and packed a lot into a very short poem 🙂 Good job!
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Thank you,
I appreciate the feedback. I’m glad you liked it. I hope hit helps others especially during Mental Health Awareness Month.
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