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  • Lakisha Hamilton shared a letter in the Group logo of PoetryPoetry group 1 months, 2 weeks ago

    Overcoming adversity and achieving success

    In the darkness of doubt and despair,
    I carried the weight of judgment unfair.
    Bipolar, depression, schizophrenia’s shadow,
    Teachers’ words piercing like a sharp arrow.

    “You’ll never be anything, just a lost cause.”
    Echoes of doubt, reinforcing flaws.
    But deep within, a flame flickered bright,
    A spirit unbroken, ready for the fight.

    Through the storms of mental strife,
    I embraced the challenges of life.
    Rising above the cruel words spoken,
    I refused to let my spirit be broken.

    Amidst the chaos, I found my way,
    Striving for a brighter day.
    First in my family to reach that height,
    A beacon of hope, shining so bright.

    I walked the path less traveled by,
    Defying odds reaching for the sky.
    People’s eyes now filled with surprise,
    Seeing the truth behind their lies.

    I confess the pain that once held me down,
    The weight of expectations, a heavy crown.
    But in spite of it all, I stand tall and strong,
    A testament to resilience all along.

    So here I am, a survivor, a warrior true,
    Proving wrong every naysayer’s view.
    I am not defined by my past’s dark spree,
    I am here, I am free, I am me.

    Lakisha Hamilton

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    • Lakisha, This is an awesome piece. You Should use this piece for our contest that is due today. I love it. You are a warrior. Thank you for sharing. <3 Lauren

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  • Overcoming adversity and achieving success

    In the tempest of my mind’s fierce gale,
    Where shadows loomed and doubts assailed,
    I walked a path, oft deemed too frail,
    By voices harsh, where hope had paled.

    They spoke in tongues of bleak defeat,
    In classrooms cold, their words did chime,
    “You’ll mount to naught,” their chorus bleak,
    But still, I climbed beyond their rhyme.

    With every whisper, sharp as thorns,
    That I’m the storm, the child awry,
    I bore the brunt of scornful scorns,
    Yet never let my dreams go by.

    Bipolar’s swing, depression’s night,
    The borderline’s uncertain dance,
    Schizophrenic shadows, lacking light,
    Each battle joined, I did advance.

    They could not see the strength within,
    The silent wars I fought unseen,
    Against the tempest, fierce and grim,
    I rose above what might have been.

    And now, behold this cap and gown,
    The first in line, my family’s pride,
    A bachelors’ earned, my scepter and crown,
    In knowledge’s light, I now abide.

    So let them gaze with widened eyes,
    At who I’ve become, against all odds,
    A testament to the unyielding skies,
    That bend and break at the hands of gods.

    The problem child, the one “so different,”
    Has sculpted triumph from the pain,
    With every step, more proficient,
    In spite of rain, I’ve grown through rain.

    Now let the past’s cruel judgments rest,
    For I’m still standing, tall and true,
    A life reclaimed, a heart unbowed,
    A brilliant light, forever new.

    The whispers fade, the voices dim,
    No longer shall their echoes chide,
    For I am more than they foresaw,
    A phoenix rising, in full stride.

    Lakisha Hamilton

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