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cristalreynoso1 submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter or poem to your younger self about why he or she shouldn’t worry about the future 1 years agoWhat’s Wrong Little One?
Cristal ReynosoWhat’s wrong little one?
What’s that frown all about?
Don’t you know it’ll all be okay.
You shouldn’t worry about that troubles you may face. Instead focus on the adventures you will make!
Just like the birds above gliding through life.
It’s going to be alright.What’s up young man?
What’s that frown all about?
Don’t you know it’ll all be okay.
It’s was just another bad day, some times there’s struggles we face. But we mustn’t let the world take our fate!
Just like the lions know their place in life.
It’s going to be alright.It’s all alright.
It’s all alright.Voting is closed
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The line, “Just like the lions know their place in life,” is a great line because it exudes confidence. We can learn so much about the ourselves around us if we learn from nature and the world around us. I wonder what young man you’re writing about. The fact it seems you are addressing someone else is intriguing! Thank you for sharing.
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cristalreynoso1 submitted a contest entry to
Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years agoThe Prince of Peace
Cristal ReynosoThe Prince of Peace is always there
In his arms I rest my soul
He takes care of my every need
I melt into his graceful hands
I can’t wait to feel his love againMy heart,
He can have it for he lays me in green pastures
My soul be weary without him
Thanks to Him I breathe soothingly
I can’t believe how much he loves me
Thanks for making me free..
Freewill to make my own choices yet you still have me at my lowestThanks Prince of Peace.
My soul be lifted by your peace, eternally.Voting is closed
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Artists @ Their Finest-Thank You Beautiful Soul!!!
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I really love the detail and imagery you used in your story! For example, “melt into his graceful hands” or “lays me in green pastures”. It made it very easy to imagine the words you’re saying in my mind and paint a picture! Your language is very soft and warm and fits the tone of your poem. Thank you for sharing 🙂
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