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  • whitjr submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write a poem about the change you want to see in the worldWrite a poem about the change you want to see in the world 1 years ago

    PINUS CONTORTA

    PINUS CONTORTA

    Coming around the final red rock
    a group of which perches precariously
    on top of each other
    it had been a steady climb up
    the last thousand feet, ascending,
    reaching for the infinity of a cloudless blue sky
    having seen the top blonde rocks
    those that might have been whitewashed
    in the sun up there for maybe
    a thousand thousand years

    these had seen the cultures of man come
    and go, likely some blood shed in doing so
    and also clean births of new stars
    with the meteor showers

    the pines growing up there
    twisted , moved about by the winds
    and events that danced around
    their brown and red trunks and green limbs
    reaching for sanity
    from the frailties of men.

    There was a hearth circle
    in the only flattish place up there
    cinders in it nearly washed away
    by the rain of time’s passage
    still, a few were nestled
    around the inner border of the circle.
    A rock overhang overhead
    carbon from the smoke stained it’s roof
    a testament to the antiquity
    an intensity of flames leaping, swirling so long ago

    what shit had been shot while seated around
    watching the fire’s anesthesia
    shadows on faces, so far off in the dim past
    the conversations have blown away with the smoke

    no synthesizer music here,
    likely a soft native flute
    perhaps some drumming on a nearby log
    or the resonating rasp made of armidillo shell
    moving the rhythms of those seated
    in conversation, on the events of their day.

    Did a light-headedness come from a new birth
    or perhaps a discovery of delight
    of a successful hunt
    the careful killing of brother bighorn sheep
    enough to feed all of them
    along with finding a new chert vein in the rocks
    nearby, to make their projectile points,
    or did a darkness come into their lives
    like a terrible encounter of a loss to sister catamount
    who was also hungry for fresh warm meat.

    The pines are twisted,
    moved by the human discourse.

    Strength remains, even when the wind stops.
    Poem Copyrighted 4/2023, Ray Whitaker
    Photo Copyrighted 4/2023, Ray Whitaker

    RAY WHITAKER

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    • Ray, reading your poems always makes me think. You are thoughtful and your words are so carefully chosen. This is yet another beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing and thank you for being a part of our family. <3 Lauren

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