• tionna submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At PeaceWrite A poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years, 1 months ago

    my definition of peace

    peace, the peace that’s so so very sweet
    and lovely filled with incredible
    nature beings such as the birds
    the bumbles bees lady bugs, caterpillars,
    and even things we could hardly
    ever see

    peace, the peace that you’re
    mind is so free and at ease the
    freedom you have without
    over thinking, under thinking
    with such anxiety till
    the point where you could
    hardly take a moment and even breathe

    peace, I want the peace that comes
    with happiness, excitement, joy,
    and laughter filled
    with friends and family
    till the point where sadness or
    drama isn’t included or even such a thing

    peace, the peace
    from the moment that
    i wake up or even go to sleep
    negativity isn’t even a
    thought or thing keeping me
    from my everyday things
    that would escape me
    from my positive reality

    peace, the peace
    where privacy, calmness
    quietness, isolation isn’t a
    bad thing just being able
    to enjoy life without all
    the unnecessary noise
    and irritation that will
    disturb me

    peace, the peace
    that’s so light and pretty
    like the sky filled with
    many clouds on a hot
    sunny warm day when
    taking a swim is almost
    perfect
    for that specific day

    peace, the peace
    where life is like
    the ocean floating
    and the waves
    maneuvering so
    smoothly and perfectly
    sounding where that’s
    all I want to hear and
    just see

    peace
    peace
    is all I want in life
    and may ever need

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    • I love the structure and format of your poem! You really emphasized that this is a poem about peace, and your words are laced with beauty. I loved when you said, “Where privacy, calmness, quietness, isolation isn’t a bad thing.” Too often, we place negativity on the slow components of life when really these are opportunities for great peace 🙂 Thank you for sharing!

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    • It seems like you really understand what matters in life, and you lean into those things. I also agree with Saga! I love how you structured this piece. I felt more peaceful just reading it. Thank you for sharing.<3 Lauren

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