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brewith1e submitted a contest entry to What is your ”perfect day?” 1 months, 3 weeks ago
Dear Father

In my perfect day
You’d still be here
We would be sipping coffee
By the pier
Watching the morning sunrise
Seeing the glimmer in your eyes

In my perfect day
We would read underneath palm trees
Taking in the ocean breeze
Snapping memories that will never leave

In my perfect day
Cancer wouldn’t exist
Taking you away
Would be completely dismissed

In my perfect day
We would watch the sunset by the water
You would never leave
I’d still have my father

In my perfect day
I would live inside a world
Where there would be no fear
And when the day is done
You would still be here

Bre Lynn
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- Ari McGough replied 1 months, 1 weeks ago
  
  Salutations,
  Firstly, my sincerest condolences. May he rest in peace.
  I feel your grief behind your words. I pray your heart heals and your memories bring you comfort, more than pain. Your piece is very expressive and elegantly melancholic.
  
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- Lauren Brill replied 1 weeks, 3 days ago
  
  I am so very sorry for your loss, Bre. This is an incredibly beautiful poem. I am sure your father is smiling while he watches over you. Sending hugs. <3 Lauren
  
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