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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Greetings, your poem beautifully captures the magic of love and the feeling of security it brings. The imagery and emotions you convey are both heartfelt and relatable, making us feel the depth of your connection. The way you describe growth and mutual support is touching and inspiring.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Greetings, Your poem vividly captures the struggle between vengeance and forgiveness, using powerful imagery to depict the internal conflict. The rich descriptions and emotional depth draw readers into the narrator’s turmoil and ultimate resolution. Your narrative flows beautifully, making the journey from pain to forgiveness both poignant and impactful.
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Thank you. This was a hard experience to capture adequately and unearthed a fair bit of pain, but writing always helps me process trauma.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Greetings, your metaphor of black and white powerfully conveys the importance of seeing things as they are. The clear and direct language emphasizes honesty and clarity. Beautifully written.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Greetings, your poem depicts a beautiful journey from fear to self-discovery using vivid imagery. The transition from feeling trapped to finding one’s light is powerful and inspiring. The detailed descriptions create a strong emotional connection, making us feel your growth. Bravo!
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Thank you so much for the encouraging words. Truly means a lot.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Greetings, this poem effectively contrasts the comforting and oppressive aspects of silence. Your shift from tranquility to tension by using the recurring line is powerful and resonating. Wonderfully written.
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Thank you! I’m so happy this poem resonated with you. Your comments encourage me to keep writing.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Greetings, a creative use of the metaphor of a rose to explore the complexities of a woman’s heart and emotions. Your comparison between the structure of a rose and human qualities is insightful and vivid, a strong visual element. Overall, it’s a thoughtful and evocative piece that captures the resilience and nurturing aspects of a woman’s nature.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Greetings, the description of confinement and longing for freedom is quite vivid. You have a raw and personal tone that adds depth, with a touch of awkward phrasing. The hopeful resolution at the end offers a strong, empowering message about taking control of one’s destiny. Overall, it’s a powerful piece that could benefit from a bit more polish and clarity.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Greetings, your poem is very heartfelt and relatable. It captures the journey of a relationship from its humble beginnings to a meaningful, committed partnership. The use of rhyme adds a musical quality and it’s an earnest tribute to your partner.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Health, Wellness and Chronic Conditions 11 months ago
Greetings, your piece is really inspiring and relatable. The celebration of resilience and optimism is encouraging and warming. Beautiful piece.
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You are so sweet thank you!:)
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Health, Wellness and Chronic Conditions 11 months ago
Greetings, the reflection on healing and growth after a painful relationship, inspiring resilience and self-worth. It’s raw, showing your journey towards happiness and self-discovery. Overall, it’s empowering and brave.
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I’ve learned once you find yourself life gets so much more enjoyable! Thank you for your kind words!
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Remembering those we lost/Grief 11 months ago
Greetings, Your honesty and imagery evoke shared sorrow and the importance of cherishing time with loved ones. Overall, it’s a poignant reminder of life’s preciousness. Splendidly written and my condolences.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Surviving Addiction 11 months ago
Greetings, a beautiful expression of a deep connection and appreciation for shared emotions, despite physical distance. Very heartfelt, touching on themes of vulnerability and hope. The personal reflections and spiritual elements add depth, offering comfort and reassurance to whoever reads. Thank you for sharing!
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That is very encouraging.Thank you so much! ♥
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Surviving Addiction 11 months ago
Greetings, I commend you for your bravery in exploring addiction’s challenges, portraying raw emotions and struggles with honesty. Your piece vividly depicts the pain and chaos that come with substance abuse, while also conveying a longing for redemption and a way out of darkness. Congratulations and thank you for staying with us!
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 11 months ago
Greetings, a beautiful celebration of life’s simple joys like sunrise, music, and friendship, inspiring gratitude and positivity. A reminder for us to appreciate the little things and make a positive impact on their world. Bravo!
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 11 months ago
Greetings, I love the honesty and empowerment urging us to value ourselves and pursue healthier relationships. The mix of quotes and original thoughts adds depth and inspires hope.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 11 months ago
Greetings, your style is captivating, blending vivid imagery with nostalgia. It draws me into memories through concise phrases and rhythmic flow, evoking a sense of longing and reflection. Beautifully written.
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Thank you I appreciate that so much!
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 11 months ago
Greetings, your poem is uplifting and inspiring, inviting readers to share in your newfound sense of clarity and optimism. It’s a beautiful piece.
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Thank you I appreciate that!!
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 11 months ago
Greetings, your celebration of resilience and authenticity is wonderfully written. It encourages perseverance and self-acceptance, highlighting the strength of embracing one’s true identity. I hope this becomes a reality and a source of encouragement for everyone in their self-discovery journey.
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I hope this does too—once someone can find their base they’re only uphill climbing to reach their own desired or goals!
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 11 months ago
Greetings, your description of yearning for the beauty of the stars amidst the routine of life is quite striking. It contrasts the grandeur of the universe with the limitations of human existence, leaving a poignant reminder of life’s fleeting nature. Splendidly written.
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Ari McGough responded to a letter in topic Poetry 11 months ago
Greetings, your poem beautifully captures the ups and downs of life’s journey, offering encouragement and hope to readers. Your use of vivid imagery and a rhythmic flow convey themes of perseverance and resilience, bravo! Overall, it’s an inspiring ode to the human spirit.
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Thank you very much! I am so happy to hear that my intent to inspire was achieved.
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