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lovelyflower submitted a contest entry to Why do you love yourself? 3 months, 2 weeks ago
You will rise
Little Lilly,
I know the feeling that glares back at you
when you look into the mirror
Unlocking your fears
That never came true
but that’s news to you
Those scenarios eat you alive
Yet here I am to show you
You will rise
There will be a day that you dance in the rain
Without a care in the world to take your joy away
Your freckled face and gleaming eyes
Glimmer like the dew does during sun rise
Your forever daydream awaits you soon
My dear, it’s because of you
That little girl thinks “I want to be that way too”
I want to fall in love with all that I see
And take my time to live carefree
In a world full of beauty
Slow down and feel the wind on your cheek
Watch the caterpillar crawl up the tree
Where one day it will grow it’s wings
Then fly away to remind you someday
You will rise
And the world will see
The beauty I see in you
And one day, you’ll see in meWith care and love,
Your future self
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I love the repetition! Repeating the phrase “You will rise” really helped drive home your message and added power to your story. There’s so much beauty in the slowness of life and your poem really captured that 🙂
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Thank you so much! It makes my heart so happy that I can share my poetry and hear feedback from my peers. So glad you like it!
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This is so well written and shows the world the beauty that’s already within you. That’s always been there. Thank you for your creativity. I can’t wait to see where your butterfly wings take YOU. Thank you for sharing and thank you for being part of our Unsealed family. <3 Lauren
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Thank you so much for your support and kind words! I am so blessed to have the opportunity to share my writing with others! I am so proud to be a part of the Unsealed community!
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