• rickwrites submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At PeaceWrite A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years ago

    A Dream by the River

    The coo of a dove,
    gently wakes me from my slumber,
    I dreamt of laying near a babbling brook,
    accompanied by a good book,
    hoping the right direction is hidden somewhere in these pages.
    The morning light,
    lightly lifted my eye lids
    asking me:
    “Hey, are u ready to start the day?”
    A day where the only demands needing to be met,
    are that of being a good father .
    That sounds like so much fun!
    We can build a fort,
    we can go to the park and run.
    Then I remember the problems
    I tried to pin inbetween
    prelude and the exodus,
    they started to seep out of the page.
    My son’s laughter met my anxiety outside and said
    “not today!”
    What it did allow-
    was a welcoming thought,
    for me to be a kid again.
    Watching him live his life with so much joy,
    Made me realize that
    I needed to heal my inner boy.

    The current cacophony
    currently singing through water,
    opened the valves of my heart so my younger self and my son can play together.

    “A Dream by the River.”

    The Sunlight was very jealous of our smiles,
    The Breeze stopped for a second
    to enjoy our laughter,
    The Grass welcomed the
    weight of our weightlesness,
    It felt our heartbeat with every step,
    then we layed down and became blades of grass ourselves.
    My son safely nestled next to me and we dozed off…

    RW

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    • I love how you captured the anxieties of being a father! I love the shift between focusing on being a good father, to worry, to realizing you can be a good father by being a kid too. I also really like your use of literary devices, like saying, “The Sunlight was very jealous of our smiles.” All around, you brought a lot of creativity and sweetness to the table 🙂 Thank you for sharing!

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    • I love all this. I love how connecting to your son, connects you to yourself in a way that brings you peace and joy you are watching your son experience. This is so poetically perfect. Thank you for sharing!<3 Lauren

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