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Lorinda Boyer shared a letter in the
Poetry group 1 years ago
Silence is Golden
Silence is golden when we speak of a breeze
Flowing peacefully, lightly with the greatest of ease
Silence is golden when we speak of trees
Stoic, majestic, free as they please
Silence is golden when we speak when we’re told
And learn to be quiet and not too bold
Silence is golden when we speak of love
Specifically ordained by God above
Silence is golden except when it’s not
When it ties one’s stomach up in a knot
And causes one’s heart to fester and rot
Because who you’ve become goes against what you’re taught
And the fundamentalist church you’re raised in
Excludes you in silence because of your ‘sin’
Silence it golden except when it’s not
And then you must fight it with all that you’ve got
For if you stay silent and dear lives are lost
Then silence that’s golden comes at too high a cost
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Greetings, this poem effectively contrasts the comforting and oppressive aspects of silence. Your shift from tranquility to tension by using the recurring line is powerful and resonating. Wonderfully written.
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Thank you! I’m so happy this poem resonated with you. Your comments encourage me to keep writing.
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