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Write A poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 4 months, 3 weeks ago The Soul's Haven
Kristina JohnsonBeneath the radiant sun,
Waves crash nearby,
The chilled water beckons to me,
As sand clings to my feet.Seagulls dance and flutter about,
While dolphins playfully surface.
Sandcastles tower amidst the sand,
Children’s joyous laughter fills the air.An oasis of tranquility,
Salt air whispers gently.
This is my favorite place,
A haven for the soul.Sereneness,
Peacefulness,
Endless horizon,
This is pure bliss.As the waves come and go,
Renewal washes over me,
In the vast ocean’s expanse,
All problems fade away.Drifting with the current,
Worries are no more,
This sanctuary revives and rejuvenates,
The beach: my happy place.Voting is closed
I LOVE your use of imagery. You put the reader in your shoes with this piece, and I can vividly imagine the picture you’re painting. I feel the itch of the sand on my feet, and I can feel the fire of the sun beaming on me as I read 🙂 Great job and thank you for sharing
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I love how you wrote that waves come and go, and renewal washes over you. It really connects the image of the beach and its impact on your peace. This is super creative. Thank you for sharing. <3 Lauren
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