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  • juliettebp submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write a poem or a letter to yourself about your goals for the new yearWrite a poem or a letter to yourself about your goals for the new year 1 years, 1 months ago

    Dawn's Arrival

    The moment before dawn.
    The longest single moment in time,
    that any one can ever experience.

    The not knowing.
    Whether night will continue,
    as it has for so long.

    Or whether,
    at any second,
    the sun could make its debut.

    Nights wind blows through your hair,
    chilling you to the bone,
    as you watch the horizon in anticipation.

    Eyes wide,
    breath slow,
    shoulders tense.

    You scream,
    “When will this night be over?”

    Your voice travels across the hills,
    dancing with the grass,
    as it sways in the wind.

    A silence follows,
    the land stills,
    and then a glimpse at the edge of your view.

    Milky blue, shifting into blushing beauty.
    A smile grows across your face.

    Teeth glaring,
    cheeks wide and creased.

    The sun’s light and promise breaks the horizon.
    Glimmering against dewy grass,
    and shimmering steadily atop pools of lone water.

    Your journey continues,
    and you carry on.

    Jules

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    • Jules… this poem is a whole mood! It really sets a tone and shares your feelings. Your writing shares so much strength and intelligence. But there is also pain and struggle. Decide whatever it is you want to do in life, and just go for it. You are smart and you are strong. There is nothing in your past and there is no person that can stop you. So just go for it. <3Lauren

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    • Jules this is such a powerful poem! Your journey will continue. You have so much strength and nothing should hold you back from reaching your goals, not even your past. You’ve built solid ground now it’s time to move forward and step out of your comfort zone.

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