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Write a letter to your fear (Sponsored by ProWritingAid) 4 months, 3 weeks ago
See, sea
as if she actually trembles before the glance of the beautiful but so frightened sea
I stare with revelation as I look upon the waves and sounds before it can even look back at me
see sea, maybe the ocean isn’t what it’s watered up and down to actually be
blue, beautiful water and boats with many more things filled with so many animals that we can even hardly name see sea, what I mean?
trusting that one could float above what’s attainable to feel without the fear
that follows me
which shadows us
they eventually think
can grip you tightly?but one tends to fight one punch up in the atmosphere gasping for some type of fulfillment that this individual could eventually catch a break
stopping for a second to breathe, breathe, take deep breaths for a moment, and allow whatever tension to ease like the breeze sea, now you see what I mean?
Lifeguard, please help quickly! Someone is drowning!!!!
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Tionna, you are right that the sea is a beautiful and frightening thing. Watching the waves come and go soothes the soul, but thinking about what lies beneath the surface is a different matter. The deep sea is unknown, and humans are trained to fear what they don’t know about. If we aren’t careful, it’s easy to drown. Thank you for sharing this powerful piece!
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Wow! Thank you so much for taking the time out to read my poem I appreciate it.
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