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cherthing submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem or letter about your best memory of 2024 6 months ago
Garden of Memories
Another year for the books
Many trips into the unknown
What a long journey this has been
But I didn’t go through it aloneMy body is no longer my prison
But a shell that I must keep
With reconstructions here and there
It has become the home for meI walked through a garden of roses
I walked through the streets of L.A.
Spotted “New Flowers” in cracks on the ground
They brightened even the darkest of daysSome of the flowers have withered
Dead leaves fell in their place
I’ve found new joy in bare branches
For everything has its time and placeThe seasons don’t change where I live
But I change with every step as I grow
Everything is here for a moment
I welcome, I love, I let goWhat will I take away from this year?
It’s hard to choose just one
Each moment was a puzzle piece
Crafted by God’s loveOpen doors led to friendship
A fellowship as well
You took a plane, I took the train
And we created stories to tellThis year was a garden of memories
I’ve planted the seeds that you sent me
The kindest gesture in the form of a gift
But the greatest gift of all is your friendshipThank you for your warm hugs
Thank you for your prayers
Thank you for all you’ve blessed me with
And always being thereVoting is closed
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Your flow is wonderful! This piece feels very intentional, it feels like every line has a purpose and moves the plot forward. I think you did a beautiful job of capturing growth and gratitude while appreciating your loved ones. I think the description of flowers and puzzle pieces highlights the complex journey towards growth that you went on and these symbols strengthen your piece a lot. Great work!
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