• vermontpoetess submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At PeaceWrite A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years, 1 months ago

    Still: a sonnet

    Whenever feelings overwhelm my breath,
    I seek the strength of flannel’s stalwart plush
    to drink up overflow that runs unchecked
    down cheeks afire with life’s enduring flush,
    reviving smoky tiparillo tang
    as giant, blue-roped hands skim chestnut hair
    to baritonal mumblings that hang
    like sanctuary sigils in the air.

    His everlasting warmth embraces me
    with patience and a gentle iron will
    as echos swirling on an astral breeze
    until my inner turbulence is still–
    for thirty years I’ve felt Dad’s quiet peace
    upon this verdant cemetery hill.

    Necia Campbell

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    • This is such a beautiful way to tell a story about loss. Your poem reminds us that loss is an illusion. The people we love may shed their physical skin, but they always remain with us in little ways 🙂 This made me feel really warm and was easy to relate to! I also really enjoyed your flow. Thank you for sharing!

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      • Thank you. I appreciate your response as I didn’t realize my words portrayed loss as an illusion, although re-reading it I see now how they could be interpreted that way. I do like to end emotional pieces on a positive note when I can because the world needs hope. ❤️

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