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    leximae submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At PeaceWrite A poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years, 1 months ago

    The Space

    The impact of my Romeo’s embrace
    can send ease throughout the mind—
    compiling a space of security.
    Shockwaves sent within
    outside leaves only a grin—
    the impact of my Romeo’s embrace.
    Allowing the spirit to roam free
    across the buds that have been planted—
    compiling a space of security.
    Growing in the races
    tangling up the two souls—
    the impact of my Romeo’s embrace.
    Following the direction the fingers intertwine
    as we head towards the meadows—
    compiling a space of security.
    A path sent from the rain
    only he knows the pain we with-stained:
    the impact of my Romeo’s embrace—
    compiling a space of security.

    Lexi Mae
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      Saga Foss replied 11 months, 2 weeks ago

      Awww, this piece is absolutely adorable. I love your use of repetition, like “compiling a space of security” and “my Romeo’s embrace”. It really helped emphasize the overall theme of your story and made it very easy to understand 🙂 Thank you for sharing!

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