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alexcia23 submitted a contest entry to What is your ”perfect day?” 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Family Party
I can recall a particularly bright summertime day
A big family party is held in the backyard
Everyone had gathered around from near and far to this event
The happy sensation of fits of laughter heard all aroundA big family party is held in the backyard
I’m wearing my graduation cap and gown, and my high school diploma is in my hand
The happy sensation of fits of cheer is heard all around
There is nothing but love that fills my heartI’m wearing my graduation cap and gown, and my high school diploma is in my hand
My elderly great-aunt came to me with a hug and a proud smile
There is nothing but love that fills my heart
I’m glad to have her here and see me graduate high schoolMy elderly great-aunt was close to me and had a proud smile
With a side hug, she smiled wide and posed with me
I’m glad to have her here and see me graduate high school
My mother begged us to take a family picture togetherWith a side hug, watching her smiling wide and posing with me
Other close family and friends wanted to pose with me too
As my mother begged us to take a family picture together
Before this excited, fulfilled party comes to an endAs other close family and friends wanted to pose with me too
Everyone had gathered around from near and far to this event
Before this excited, fulfilled party comes to an end
I can still recall this particularly bright summertime dayVoting is closed
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Alexcia, Your letter beautifully captures the joy and love of a memorable family gathering. The imagery and emotions are vividly conveyed, creating a heartwarming atmosphere. Well done!
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Hi there, thank you for coming across my poem and for saying that! This was one of my favorite days, as a couple of members of my family (including my great aunt) are no longer alive. So, this poem is a personal one to me but a happy memory. I have a heart-warming, loving family, as this party was a double celebration for my graduation from high school and for my coming 18th birthday. Again, thank you! <3 🙂
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