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Titus Armon shared a letter in the
Poetry group 4 months ago Tomorrow
Titus ArmonI wish I had vision so I could watch you
I wish I had candy so I could give to you
I wish I had hands so I could touch yours
I wish I had a voice so I could inspire you
I wish I had courage so I could court you
I wish I had the time so I could tell you
I wish I had a store so I could sell to you
I wish I had a pet so you could too
I wish I had a bruise so I could show you
I wish I had water so I could offer you
I wish I had directions so I could guide you
I wish I had style so I could compliment you
I wish I had grace so I could remind you
I wish I had a poem so I could share with you
If not today then maybe tomorrow
I can’t promise today
But I promise I’ll think of this tomorrow
Titus, I love the repetition in this poem. It really drives home the fact that if you could, you would. I think it’s beautiful that you wish you had all the things you listed just so that you could make another person happy. That kind of selflessness shows true devotion and love. Thank you for sharing your work!
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@emmycraig Thanks I believe is does show some of those things you mentioned. That’s really all I was trying to do.
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