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Ray Whitaker shared a letter in the
Poetry group 7 months, 1 week ago
WHAT THE DUMPSTER DIVERS LEFT BEHIND
She had left so much here
the carloads taken to Goodwill
numbered, now, beyond ten
he’d kept a count, tho, if pressed
he’d not admit to ittoo much there to allow in
it was only to go outelsewhere.
Which thoughtlined to such a different place
one of today the multi-colored thoughts and pictures
in an everyday, always anyway, person’s mindall jumbled together
with feeding the dog
the oatmeal for breakfast
the judgement living in the bathroom mirror
and changing the bedsheets just ‘cause it is Wednesday.She had left so much behind.
He had so much left to do.
Wow this poem is amazing. One thing I love about poems is that the reader can picture it differently and the author has a different thought process on it. From reading this it seems like the girl left the guy that they were in a relationship and she left so much things for him to do that she usually does. He’s not used to it because he’s never experienced it. I’m probably wrong but this is what i see.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. The poem above was part of a writing prompt in a class I was in last Wed.s, led by Nancy Dorrier. Having worked with Nance before, I enrolled in this class to seek some empowerment in writing shorter poems.
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