This is such a powerful piece that vividly portrays the internal struggle of breaking free from fear and doubt. The progression from timidity to strength is beautifully captured, especially with the contrast between “whisper” and “thunder” or “chokehold” and “fire.” I love how the imagery builds momentum, leading to the final strike of self-empowerment. The resilience and defiance at the end, “I’m stronger than I thought, while I turn back for none,” feels like a triumphant declaration of taking control. It’s a raw and inspiring exploration of finding your voice and strength in the face of inner turmoil. You really took me on a journey from vulnerability to power. Amazing work!

Jessica, this is a powerful and moving poem. Everyone is fearful from time to time, but the way you describe the fire that brings your fighting spirit to life shows how strong you truly are. I am inspired by your words and hope to harness that same fire in my own life. Thank you for sharing your experience!