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jessenb90gmailcom submitted a contest entry to
Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years ago
Halycon days
I am a snowy sculpturer
Carving waves of welding down the chuteI spy a young racer
riding a magic carpet for the first time
Into the bluebird forestA witch floats overhead
Mesmerizing us with her backflips and wildcat ways
A chef making pizza nearby devours every biteAs each dreamer creates their own masterpiece,
I inhale frosty air
and transform into a helicopter
Gliding uphill and experiencing the aerial view
In all its wonderI arrive at the white crown
And dismount
A new friend emerges, a snowcat,
She welcomes me with champagneEncouraging me
to savor each elevation
and remind me halcyon days are hereVoting is closed
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Snowboarding and skiing arent activities I would typically do but your poem makes me want to try out some snow sports. I love the creativity and the language you use to represent everything you see. Keep writing!
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Thank you for your kind words!
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I love to rollerblade. How you describe snowboarding reminds me of the freedom and peace I feel when I Rollerblade. The way you describe the way you feel makes me actually feel like I am on the journey with you. Thank you for sharing, and thank you for being part of The Unsealed family. <3 Lauren
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Thank you! Looking forward to discussing everyone’s poems tonight!
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