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    The Devil's Ride

    I danced with the devil
    Burned by the rush of the ride,
    Spiraling down cliffs in his black corvette ride
    Engulfed by flames, contently trapped inside

    A mirror to all yet avoiding my own eyes
    Fear constricts me, tangled in thorny vines
    Possessing every thought, screams fly by

    Suffocated by his grip, both refusing and begging
    Digging his claws deeper into my sides,
    One false step: it’ll ruin my life

    There’s comfort in hell when it’s all you know
    Until the small cracks shatter the ego
    Fresh air ebbs and flows
    A taste of peace still on the tip of my tongue

    Afraid this dark mark will forever stain my heart,
    Trudge through the ashes honoring every step fought
    Fear of my reflection, loathing the dark rim-stained eyes
    On display for the world- haunting, sleepless nights

    Envision a life where dreams don’t flush down the drain
    Raging voices of doubt seeped into my brain
    Threatening to replace the whisper of truth
    The flicker of hope they’re demanding to undo

    Afraid of my fire, so I let myself drown
    Battling engraved years of doubt demanding I tap out
    Slowly releasing the shackles, once kept me safely chained in place

    Undress my denial as slow as I need
    Deny the rushing pace that was once a magnet to me
    Respite flowing through with each slow breath I breathe

    Chasing impulsivity and chaos once craved
    Now repelled by me: unweaving doubts revealed in me
    Without fail, I lose my flame when I don’t slow down
    Breathe in breathe out, hope guides me now

    I’ve danced with the devil
    Hauntings of the past attempt to crawl back
    A smiling reflection is what I see, knowing they can’t grasp me
    Deserving of the fantasies I’ve once dreamed, intertwine with reality
    At my pace, as slow as I need

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