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efair0112 submitted a contest entry to
Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years ago Safe Place
Erik FairPeace was a dream
When we wake
Its pain and chaosPeace was a goal
While we hope
It often feels lostPeace was when I’m sleeping
As I float
While deep breathingPeace was a sigh
That we let out
After we cryPeace was a lie
As I ran
Tried to hidePeace was at least
Was a fictional
Treasure piecePeace so I thought
Was attainable
If a long shotBut then..
Peace found me
And held me
Oh so tightPeace made love
Fire wishes
It burned so brightPeace is pure passion
Pure hearted
And loving of funPeace is what
I hope you feel
Cause you are warmer than the sunMy peace is air hockey
The hotel pool
The Halal Guys near schoolYou deserve
The peace that
Makes your sweet soul feel fullBecause of you
I now know peace
Is more than just a dreamSo thank you
For existing
My peanut butter QueenVoting is closed
What a beautiful tribute to your “peanut butter Queen”. I love how you describe wanting to provide peace to the person who gives you peace. That is one of the most meaningful ways we can show our love to others. Your description of peace as a kind of warmth that finds you when you are with someone you love is just perfect!
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Thank you so much for your kind words about my words! I am so sorry I am just now seeing your response, I forgot my password and did not log in for forever. Thank you so much for enjoying my message, it was written for one person but I eventually decided that I really should share this feeling with anyone who might be interested because love, peace, and the warmth those can bring are universal feelings. Thank you again!
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