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londonpoetenane submitted a contest entry to
Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years ago
UNDER YOUR BELT
Can you feel it
Hear or see it
At first zip
No need to trip
The moment I glance
Another chance
Shooting through and through
Oh the view
An overwhelming sigh
Boy do I feel high
Relief
Together in breif
You see it
CommittedA safety net
Make me sweat
Your the someone I’d put first
Wrap yourself up in his comfort
I wanna scream
Wake me from this dream
Flounder with ease
It’s me you shall please
Whole body’s weak
I can’t even speak
Minds in a trance
A little love and romance
Souls a bliss
It’s you that I missInto the frosty blizzards of winter
No time shall hinder
Continuous breeze through the crisp Spring air
Come and go as you please, no despair
Entering warm Summer nights
With all of you in site
Beneath the trees of Fall leaves
Oh the web we wove and continue to weave
In the midst of the dark
Making my mark
Manifestation of orbs
It’s you that I adoreIf I could touch you, just once
You know it’s you that I hunt
I look up, I see you
Full view and I pursue
The world turns
Heart burns, it yearns
Tender Love let us feast
Together in peace
Serenity, oh the intensity
I melt
Under your belt
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This is a beautifully written poem, London. Love is such a wonderful thing and I am glad that being with your partner brings you this overwhelming peace and happiness. My favorite part of this would be when you said “Oh the web we wove and continue to weave” because being in love can bring you to many new adventures and things you wouldn’t have…read more
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Thank you so much! I love that same phrase, and the boy in the story, my high school sweetheart, it’s been over 20 years. Communication skills were not developed back then… One day I will find him so I no longer have to look into the sky but into his heart, the brightest star…my star😉
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Aww, love this. You are so welcome, I enjoyed reading it!
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Your poem is a reflection I believe on your passions for life, being loved and cherished. It touched my heart and soul. I read it 3 times. It has a heartbeat all it’s own and yet it is your heartbeat.
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Wow! Thank you for your kind words, I don’t think I could have said it better. When two heartbeats become one, smiles teehee
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