• 4thdynasty submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write a poem about your goals for 2025Write a poem about your goals for 2025 5 months ago

    Pennies

    I saw my first wishing well when I was still a child
    The idea was so novel, I remember how I smiled
    What a silly thing to believe, I told myself that day
    Why would you pointlessly throw all your pennies away?

    I wish I had a ticket back to when I was a kid
    I wish I could have learned a little sooner how to give
    I wish I’d had the courage to tell her that I loved her
    Or hadn’t acted so embarrassed every time I hugged my mother

    I wish all those poems I wrote weren’t left unfinished
    And that those songs in my head made it out to begin with
    I wish I wasn’t such a dreamer, a believer, or
    Maybe I wish that I had believed a bit more

    I really wish this poem wasn’t written by a hypocrite
    Afraid to guarantee any of the things that he says
    And maybe then I wouldn’t doubt these words as I say them
    And I’d believe in the promises I made, verbatim

    I wouldn’t laugh at the people filling wells with pennies
    And look down and realize that I’m the one who’s chucked to many
    So here’s my final penny, the only one that’s left
    It’s something that I’m trying very hard not to forget

    I wish to go back and hug the younger version of me
    And tell him things are never quite as hopeless as they seem
    I wish that I could stare into his eyes, head to head
    I wish that I could stop that kid from wishing he was dead

    Wish that I could hold his hand, but when I look at my side
    It baffles me to realize he’s the one who’s holding mine

    Every time he made a wish, taped up a dream that he liked
    All those melodies he hummed, all those pretty little rhymes
    He’s holding out their broken pieces as he stares into my eyes
    You can fix these, He whispers, You’re the only one who can
    And then he knocks the horrid little pennies from my hands

    I’ve been wishing all my life, it left me penniless and poor
    But lately I have found that I’m not wishing anymore
    Yes, wishes got me nowhere, so I traded them for goals
    Believe your life is in your hands and you’ll hold the controls

    This year I have decided that I’m going to believe
    For that little kid who told me wear your heart on your sleeve
    I’m going to finish those songs for the one who began
    Because I owe my inner child for the man that I am

    I’m going to hug the ones I love, pick them up and spin them ‘round
    And hold on tight forever like I’ll never put them down
    Lose myself giving to people, light a smile on a face
    Because that’s the way I found myself in the first place

    I might buy a ticket back to my home by the mountains
    And find somebody throwing pennies, sitting by a fountain
    And I might knock those precious little coins out of their hand,
    And as they bounce around I’ll giggle like a crazy man

    After they curse at me, I’ll tell them, pennies are like moments
    Please, don’t just throw them all away wishing that doors would open
    If you only looked around, you might find that there’s a key
    Pennies are so valuable, don’t treat them like they’re free

    Samuel P. Cook

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    • Samuel, this is such a moving poem. I absolutely love the line “Yes, wishes got me nowhere, so I traded them for goals.” We spend so much time wishing our lives would improve in some way, but we are in control. By setting goals and working toward them, we have the power to make our wishes come true. Who needs wishing wells, anyway? Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece!

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    • I really love the idea of the wishing pennies. As children they are magical and as adults they are considered lucky if found a certain way. I really liked the line “So here’s my final penny, the only one that’s left
      It’s something that I’m trying very hard not to forget. ”
      It is easy to get caught up in our heads that we forget that we are dreamers and believers in magical things. Something to keep in mind!

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