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Write a letter or poem to or about a loved one who passed away and share how they inspire you 1 years ago Whispers
Ricardo AlbertorioYou’ll come to me in whispers
And you’ll visit me in dreams
I’ll awaken from your kisses
Softly lit by radiant beams
In the echos of my life
I will catch your sweetest voice
I will hear our love’s pure song
And my heart will then rejoice
I will strain my tired ear
For each whisper that you gift
As I listen most intently
In our memories I will drift
And one day your gentle whispers
Will be louder and quite clear
We’ll be standing face to face
And our love’s song all will hear
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Ricardo, this is a beautiful poem. I am so sorry for your loss. What you say about memories is very true and more people should be able to hear what you are saying. Even though the person you lost isn’t present anymore, the memories that you made with them will live on forever in your heart. ♥♥
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Thank you, Harper. It really means a lot to me that you appreciate my poem. I tried to convey the message that our loved ones are not got after their death…they live on in our memories and in the “whispers” of their presence that we still feel after they are physically gone from our lives. It is a concept that gives me solace and hope that life doesn’t just end with a last breathe. That is just an “until we meet again”. I hope this makes sense. Thank you.
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It makes perfect sense. They will always be with you and you will forever cherish how they affected your life and how you affected theirs. Again, I am so sorry for your loss and I have hope that YOU will get through this even though it is challenging.
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