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bri-chandler submitted a contest entry to
Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years ago
Back and Forth
In my little house
In a state up north
Rocking peacefully
Back and forthChildren still sleeping,
Safe and warm in bed
Calm quiet thoughts,
Float in my headSipping my coffee,
Warm in my hand
A relatable feeling,
Most understand
Awaiting the day to go as plannedThis time allows my mind to adjust
To put my best foot forward,
This is a mustA deep breath in,
Inhale the grateful
A deep breath out,
Exhale the hatefulIn my rocking chair,
Feeling so at peace
Morning sounds of the honking geeseThe cars start passing by more often
As the sounds of the geese
Begin to softenI get up to the sink,
Rinse out my cup
The rocking must wait,
It’s time to get upTake on the day,
The peace and quiet must wait
Time to get going, don’t want to be late
Press pause, on my peaceful stateFast forward to the end of the day
Dinner dishes done and put away
Children warm and safe
Again, in bed they lay…On her forehead,
I kiss my daughter
Then back to the sink,
For a cold glass of waterSit down, take a sip
Again, at peace
Take a deep breath
For a calming releaseRocking peacefully
Back and forth
In my little house
In a state up north.Voting is closed
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I love this. Beautiful poem.
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Your very kind, Thank you so much!
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This is amazing! Taking a bit of time for yourself in the mornings, especially when looking forward to a stressful day, can be so relaxing. I absolutely love the phrase that you used here, “Inhale the grateful”…”Exhale the hateful.” This will definitely be a saying I will use!! Great poem!
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Harper, Thank you for taking the time to not only read my piece, but to engage with such words of kindness and encouragment 🙂
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You’re welcome! I am happy to hear what you have to say! Your words inspire me!
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Bri! This is so good. The imagery is good and this poem makes me feel like I am in that rocking chair with you. I love how this piece unfolds and tells the story of your day, which starts and ends with peace. Thank you for sharing and thank you for being part of The Unsealed family.. <3 Lauren
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Thank you for your compliments! Im so happy you appreciate the imagery in my poem. It was so thrilling writing it and having it come together full circle 🙂 It is a joy to be a part of The Unsealed Family. Such a safe space to engage, share, and inspire! So Thanks Again 🙂
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