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leoforest submitted a contest entry to Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 3 months, 4 weeks ago
Way Out There
light rippled petals
rhododendron across springs
is that a heron,
way out there?
there’s a petal on its beak.
to a quiet mind
it takes flight, bringing
Her pattern to my fingers,
unison within vision
She diffuses her petals
I connect them in new space
and we reconcile
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This is a very unique poem, Leo! Nature can be so relaxing and I am happy that you have found a way to connect to it in a way that inspires you creatively. My favorite line of yours would have to be when you said “I connect them in new space” because it shows how innovative and special you are! Not everyone has this kind of connection to nature, so I’m glad that you have found a way to express yourself while incorporating your idea of peace. Amazing work.
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I agree with Harper. Nature can be so relaxing. It really is the simple things in life. Thank you for sharing. <3 Lauren
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