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willowfaith submitted a contest entry to
Write A Poem About Where And When You Feel Most At Peace 1 years ago cherry blossoms
willow faith kirsch harttoday i found new places i wish to kiss you
where the trees kiss our faces as we walk by
our bodies sway with the bamboo
the rustling and crunching of our feet in the leaves
joining the birds in song
our hair mingles with the grass
our bodies intertwine with the vines
our lips touch like the petals of an iris
puckered like the center of a daffodildelighted by the scent of the cherry laurel
almost as delicious as the scent of your skin
the taste of honeysuckle on your lipswe lay under the cherry blossoms
in the petal-dappled sunlight
we speak soft words of adoration
our bodies melting together
sinking into the dirt
returning to the earthVoting is closed
I love how you turned a simple walk with someone you love into such a beautiful and clean poem. Great use of figurative language, I especially love how you refer to your lips as petals to connect back to the title of the poem. I hope to read more by you!
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Wow so beautiful, I never wanna wake from your dream(;
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