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lvwl094 submitted a contest entry to What is your ”perfect day?” 2 months, 2 weeks ago
A Perfect Day

A Perfect Day –

Is it something grand, that glistens in your eyes
Towering over the land
Or is it more miniscule

A moment that glimmers and refreshes your mind
A tiny tangent in the timeline that brings a surprise

They’re all as grand or as granular as you’d like

At the end of the day, it’s about how the passing of time defines your mind
It’s not repeatable in production –
But rather, something that is well worth casting

It’s the small glances that you keep near
Let them shimmer
Let them steer.

That’s my perfect day.

Victoria Soechting
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- Kayjah Lorde replied 2 months ago
  
  Victoria, your poem beautifully captures the importance of a perfect day, emphasizing the significance of both grand and minuscule moments. It encourages embracing the small glimmers that bring surprise and joy.
  
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  - Vee replied 2 months ago
    
    Hi Kayjah! Thank you for sharing your impression of the poem with me. I always look forward to hearing how it will touch the reader. Your words are much appreciated.
    
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