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whitjr submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem or letter about one way you feel misunderstood 2 months, 4 weeks ago
ENDLESS RANGE
This set of mountains
moves west, and wester still
until they move north and south
following the six directions.
Their crags speak to the sky
of the events below,
all in the rocky languages
poorly understood by those bound to two feet.
Caressing the earth in moccasins,
he, or was it she
looks about in the craggy heights
for a handhold
in the pegmatite faces of canyons
the reds and blacks in the most deeps,
those purples of sheerness
keeping the less adventurous at bay.
Coming down to the valley
below the gorges of distance barely seen
she, or was it he, knows
that off in the yonder reaches
there might just be a place in that bigness,
to drive their thoughts to.
An abandoned two story ranch house
sits the still, its invisible solitude
quiet now of children’s voices.
The hand split shingles on the roof
still keep the weather out
both the harsh winter snows and warm summer rains
don’t touch the singularity of a dry interior
as if waiting for the family to return
from where they disappeared to, so long ago.
That ranch house perched on the mountain side
has the cook house and porch attached
where a descendant has placed new tin
over it. Then left it again.
And there, under that
is the place where the questions
may have gotten answered,
and maybe not,
perhaps just having raised those inquiries
into the meanings of the lives lived
under the eaves.Voting is open!
Voting ends June 23, 2025 11:59pm
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Ray, this poem is beautiful. I can picture the mountain range and the ranch house that you described, and I see how its emptiness might lead to more questions than answers for passersby. Abandoned houses that were once homes hold forgotten memories, and sometimes it seems as if those memories are alive. Thank you for sharing this piece!
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Thanks, Emmy-
I am glad you found meaning in my poem!
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