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vermontpoetess submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to the you that didn’t think they were enough 1 weeks, 5 days ago
To The Child Whose Shame Hung Off Her Like A Secondhand Coat,
allow me to wrap you in tailored wool,
sympathy soft against your tiny neck,
buttons gleaming with the understanding
of time and distance, and seams reinforced
by threads spun in defiance to self-pity.Wear your resilience proudly, its woad-dyed blue
a calm stretch of sea amid the turbulence
of childhood when icy raindrops snaked
along your skin, under your clothes,
cryobranding your tenderness with filth.Slide your hands deep into the open slant
of pockets lined with food coupons—
brown, purple, and green printed paper
staining fingers the rainbow of poverty—
and revel in the warmth this temporary tattoo bringsfeel the cuffs migrate slowly up your forearm,
exposing secondhand-stained wrists to nature,
sun, wind, and rain neutralizing the eau de ashtray film
that’s suffocated every ivory pore since birth—
inhale the quintessential scent of bare selfas buttons strain against velvet butterfly wings
emerging from an amoxicillin-induced cocoon,
their flutter a rush of purpose and determination—
heat that radiates from navel to heart to mind,
incinerating any further need for outerwearand when your molten eruptions kiss the froth,
igneous islands take shape, grow, flourish—
a spectacular view mirrored in tranquil seas
that flash with supersaturated horizon messages
letting you know, future to past, you’ve always been enough.Style Score 100%
Voting starts August 21, 2025 12:00am
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This poem is a masterpiece! The imagery is breathtaking, vividly portraying resilience and transformation. The metaphors of clothing and nature are powerfully interwoven, creating a deeply moving and inspiring narrative of overcoming hardship. The ending is particularly beautiful and uplifting. It’s truly remarkable!
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Why, thank you, AI bot! 😉
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