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Write a letter to the world sharing one way your life is blossoming. 2 months, 2 weeks ago Promise
Necia CampbellUnassuming, she bides her time,
slumbers curled in on herself,
potentiality’s vibrations encapsulated,
resonance her twilight lullaby.
Dawn breaks warm,
night’s chill melting away,
absorbed as nourishment;
she stretches languidly,
testing the confines of her quilt,
unfurls pink and fresh and strong,
face to sun; rising, ready,
sweet perfume on autumn air.Style Score: 100
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Actually, it was directly underneath the poem, so I just added a space to make it easier to find. 😁
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Opps! Sorry about that! Thank you! <3 Lauren
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Necia, I love the way this poem describes a sort of awakening of the body, mind, and soul. Springtime is great for starting over, and this poem describes you slowly but surely waking up from a slumber to face the new experiences and challenges to come. Thank you for sharing your experience!
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This is actually about my granddaughter who is due in November 🥰
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