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Write a thank-you letter or poem to yourself 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Unsung Dedication
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This is a warm drink, sip slowly.
Appreciate the notes hidden within the ingredients.Hey, You…or shall I say Me?
In correspondence with Myself, I offer this Memoir.
The singing of an unsung dedication.
Merits to You; I declare to also be Me.I’d like to open this letter of appreciation, connect various clues,
While Journeying amidst the gratitude.You accepted a mission, the lively hood of enduring,
As if it were some kind of trend.Here in this place, I attach my fist pin, on the day the bronco ride of your life began.
Beyond 4lbs. and 11 oz, You prevailed,
Eluding the proclamation to be “the weaker twin.”
From Struggling to live, to living to defend.
You stood up for Her. Your other half from the womb, Your best friend.CHEERS!
To making laughter the language I deeply comprehend.
A Smile from ear to ear is always a Means to soothe, express delight, and to amend.Full is my heart!
Melodies escape the chamber guarded by Your lips.
Melodies made to worship, mourn, and to uplift.“Hear Hear,”
To Your wanting of more each day.
Reaching higher is a gift. Allow Yourself to imagine, to dream, and occasion to drift.I concur
Desiring discovery, You inquire with persistence, uncovering one thing and another.Prompted by a basic, “What if?”
I thank You for being the person that those leaning on You can depend.
Standing Ovation, BRAVO!
You offer presentation of Yourself unapologetically. Classy, Brassy, and Tiff.
Shamelessly portraying yourself, unaware of how to be anyone else.Much oblige
Clinging on to The Most High,
Resting on assurance of a VICTORIOUS WIN He promised to provide!Now, Concerning the dreams You were unable to apprehend.
I sigh at the thought of you being given unto love.
A devoted characteristic of You;
Even when they treasured it with the underside of their shoe.PERMISSION GRANTED
Relieve the reservoir.
Release built up pressure,
Allow the dams to overflow.
Rushing down the mural of your face.
Liberate the pain residing deep within.
Mourn those No longer counted to be a friend.You chose life when poisonous thoughts lusted for an end.
For this I thank you Most of all, you didn’t bend.I salute Your courage
Being fluid when things got stiff.
You came out swinging. Never considering,
against the wall Your back would be pinned.
deemed unable to recognize the future you had planned.LOOK AT YOU!
Picking up the pieces and creating a new outlook;
Although the image held up before You had shattered when shook.
You persevered Searching for a line of silver, covered in soot.CONGRATULATIONS!
No looking back
Once the foot met the pavement, that was that.
Bravery made room for love again this time it fluttered, lingered, and did transcend.
This Love Granted strength,
In turn, advancing Me beyond barriers placed by those who hardly dare to dream.
You have become Immune to the projections of doubt and self-limitations.
Heroically we display our talents
Ever pursuing of The Summit, You were said to ONLY “hope” to reach.You REFUSED collapse under pressure,
RELUCTANT to buckle,
RELYING firmly on what You believe.When Deterioration was Determined to Dim my Light.
You were Indestructible, Thank you,
I know you’ve had many rough nights.I Wish I had the power to step into a memory
Giving appeal to Deja Vu
I’d Place my hand upon your shoulder
Illuminating the illusion that had trapped youAlthough adverse,
Possibilities may yet be obtained.
You are a Beacon of inspiration to Me, the future of You.
Thank You for holding Memories as passwords, that unlock the secrets of this constructed identity.I RAISE A GLASS!!!
Even though the experience tasted sour, I applaud You for making the attempt.
I must say we aren’t half bad considering the story we have lived.
So Here’s to learning from the past, mistakes are the Alma Mater.Voting is closed
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This is so beautiful!
“When Deterioration was Determined to Dim my Light.
You were Indestructible, Thank you,
I know you’ve had many rough nights.” and “LOOK AT YOU!
Picking up the pieces and creating a new outlook;
Although the image held up before You had shattered when shook.
You persevered Searching for a line of silver, covered in soot.”
There’s just so many powerful, relatable verses in here!!
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Thank you. i appreciate that
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Toy, this is such beautiful poetry! I love how you mentioned being considered the “weaker” twin but finding an inner strength that would get you through the challenges life throws at you. Your grit and determination outweigh any weakness you may have been born with. You certainly are a beacon of inspiration! Thank you for sharing your experience.
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