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lorinda submitted a contest entry to
Write a letter to the world sharing one way your life is blossoming. 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Burst
New years are meant for starting over
Beginning clean and new
Unless you’re of the queer persuasion
And your government’s against you
Then blossoming becomes a struggle
As you strain simply to bloom,
Crushed under heels of persecution
Swept under rug by bigoted broom
The seeds we sow in ‘25
Require roots down deep, robust
If we’re to thrive and survive,
Under a dictator we can’t trust
To blossom sounds lovely indeed
But queer friends we must burst,
Break barriers and far exceed
Hoping for best, planning for worst89%
Voting starts June 19, 2025 12:00am
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Hi Lauren, Sorry, I forgot about this requirement. For my poem BURST it was 89%.
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Lorinda, you are right that a new year is typically meant for starting over, and I hate that you feel as though your petals are being crushed by the current environment. I hope that you are able to find peace and blossom despite any factors that work against you. Thank you for sharing your experience!
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