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Write a letter to the world sharing one way your life is blossoming. 2 months, 1 weeks ago
Dear Pink Lady Apple Tree
Early spring is bringing tiny green leaves to the tips of your twigs.
Last year we planted you. We were so proud of your place in our yard. Big plans and juicy apples were expected, but then a plague of deer came and ate all the budding, baby apples you had sprouted. Deer ate many of your leaves, too.
We were devastated.
As the end of winter approached and you looked so frail, we worried you might not make it to year two. All sticks and no style, you looked weak after months of cold and snow and ice and wind.
You survived. You may still thrive.
We have a plan to hide your apples this year, to try and save them from the many savage deer that will come for your tasty fruit. My wife read that one inventive gardener hangs Christmas tree decorations, red and green bulbs, on the branches of her apple trees. The deer try their best to bite them, but they are quickly made frustrated when they can’t break through. They give up and get going. We will try this trick this year.
Our dreams for you are blossoming as you grow, and we hope you will sprout apples as spring turns to summer.
We will water around you daily. You are in a sunny spot. We will protect you from your predators.
All signs point to Pink Lady apples in the future.
Godspeed.
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KPK, I love how you use the metaphor of this apple tree to evoke the same emotions we feel when someone or something tries to bring us down. Sometimes it feels like as soon as we start to bloom, someone destroys our blossoms. I hope that your apple tree defeats the odds and thrives this year. Thank you for sharing your experience!
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Thank you for your reply and well wishes for our little tree. It is sprouting many leaves, but no apples as of yet. Might take a few years to get apples. Best wishes!
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