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christinacanevari submitted a contest entry to
Write a poem or letter about a time the universe sent you a clear message 5 days, 5 hours ago
Severe Thunderstorm Warning
That evening,
The clock stopped.
Not at midnight,
Not a time neat enough to mark an end,
But 11:37 p.m.The second hand frozen mid-fall,
As if time was holding its breath,
As if the universe had leaned in
To watch me.The bottle lay empty,
Pills untouched beside the bed,
Lined like soldiers,
Waiting for my silent command
To dissolve the noise inside.Then, my phone buzzed.
No call, no voice I expected,
Just a single notification
From a weather app:Severe thunderstorm warning: take shelter immediately.
I sat frozen.
The absurdity settled deep in my bones.
No angels, no omens,
Only a loud, deliberate interruption.
Just a cold, precise warning to the world,
While my own storm continued to brew inside.Outside, the sky held its breath too.
No thunder, no wind,
Only the ringing of those words.
Hanging in the stillness,
Too measured to be random,
Too sharp to be ignored.I did not take shelter that night,
But I did stay.
Because sometimes,
The storm’s end is not a thunderclap,
But the slow unwinding of tension.And maybe, just maybe,
This storm inside me
Could finally begin to pass too.Voting starts September 24, 2025 12:00am
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WOW, You are absolutely Amazing!!!I think all you beautiful women will always make me cry, but that’s all right-I see more clearly every time I do 🙂 God will calm the storm-He is good at that! I wrote a poem once called, “The Cloud” simular to yours here. I understand it’s hard to calm some storms, some only Jesus can calm and that’s why He loves doing that type of stuff…Because He wants us to trust Him and let Him do His business, He does what’s humanly impossible 🙂 Keep doing good through your storms-You are a strong woman!!! 🙂
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Christina, this poem is incredible! Your word choices are so powerful, and I can almost feel your pain through the screen. Storms like the ones you described can feel never-ending, but trust that you will find peace eventually. I’m here for you while you work through this ♥
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