• vermontpoetess submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write A Letter To A Place That Changed YouWrite A Letter To A Place That Changed You 1 months ago

    To All Of The Places That Couldn't Hold Me: Liminal Breath Cannot Be Claimed

    Bobbing pigtails cocoon,
    shrink-wrap the toddler
    kneeling on a cold basement floor,
    constrict, smaller and smaller
    until she segments, earthworm thin,
    wriggles between his bare knees,
    escapes into the plush lawn
    to burrow between their houses—free.

    The crack of leather against soft flesh
    weaves a raised scarlet gambeson,
    cushion for the next whisper
    of his belt’s unsheathing—
    a base layer of resilience,
    its thick, coarse wool
    numbing the jounce as life’s stiff saddle
    gallops through the castle gate.

    Rows of granite molars
    glisten, crowd the mouth of Hope
    and behind lips of autumn grass,
    a dark earthen tongue craves
    satin-lined black enamel rest;
    snap! the flounce of a daughter’s skirt,
    caught, wears against stone teeth,
    frays to nothing over time.

    Dark feathers flash-dive, screeching,
    talons poised to shred,
    claim the exposed flesh of a mother’s heart—
    fragile, beat depolarized—
    sink instead into a bedside prayer,
    flex against antiseptic days, wings frantic,
    until, drained, worn thin by hunger,
    they ascend to hunt another soul.

    These places lie in the shadows now—
    petals pressed to dirt, scars incorporated
    into the bark of becoming,
    an unseen root anchoring past to present
    among the long-buried bones of soul raptors—
    and a weighty trunk branches,
    thins into breath on the wind—
    filter for the breaking dawn.

    Style Score: 75

    Necia Campbell

    Voting starts July 26, 2025 12:00am

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