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mysticmaker submitted a contest entry to
What would the old version of you say to the new version of you? 1 months, 2 weeks ago
"A Letter to the Phoenix”
I never fathomed we’d ascend this far.
Back then, I measured time by breakdowns.
Each breath felt borrowed.
I once wept over the same pages
that now bear the weight of your power.You—
the incarnation I once feared to envision.
You laugh without restraint.
You speak your truth as if crafted by the
heavens,
a goddess among stars,
adorning your cracks like constellations.I was a shadow, a whisper,
lost in the labyrinth of self-loathing,
drowning in the cacophony of my imagining.
I sought to numb the pain, to seize control of
the uncontrollable,
and in that struggle,
I lost sight of my light.Yet behold you now —
you unearthed the courage to surrender,
to release and find liberty in relinquishment.
You discovered that in yielding; you gained the
power to choose,
to chart a course toward the life you envisioned.Do you remember me?
The girl who dimmed her brilliance to make
others comfortable?
Who mistook mere survival for truly living?
I was small,
but I harbored the seed.And you—
you nurtured it to flourish.Know this: I am proud of you.
Even in the throes of pain.
Even as the mirror fractures.
You embody everything I yearned to become,
and more than I ever dared to dream.So, receive this letter
as both a benediction and a farewell.
I am not lost—I dwell within your roots.
But this narrative is yours now.Burn bright for the both of us.
You’ve got this.(ProWritingAid-Style Score: 100%)
Voting starts July 2, 2025 12:00am
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This is a powerful poem that leaves me feeling inspired and ready to conquer the world. Too many of us dim our light in order to make others more comfortable. We try to fit into the boxes society sets for us. I am glad that you’ve found your light again, and I hope that you continue burning brightly. Thank you for sharing your experience!
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Thank you so much, Emmy—your words truly moved me. It means everything to know that my poem sparked that kind of strength and recognition in you. I wrote it during a time I was learning to rise again, unsure if my voice would still resonate. I’m honored to share the fire with you and reminded that even embers, when shared, can light up new paths. Grateful for this connection—and for your beautiful encouragement. 💛
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