• whitjr submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write a poem or letter about one way you feel misunderstoodWrite a poem or letter about one way you feel misunderstood 2 months, 4 weeks ago

    ENDLESS RANGE

    This set of mountains
    moves west, and wester still
    until they move north and south
    following the six directions.
    Their crags speak to the sky
    of the events below,
    all in the rocky languages
    poorly understood by those bound to two feet.
    Caressing the earth in moccasins,
    he, or was it she
    looks about in the craggy heights
    for a handhold
    in the pegmatite faces of canyons
    the reds and blacks in the most deeps,
    those purples of sheerness
    keeping the less adventurous at bay.
    Coming down to the valley
    below the gorges of distance barely seen
    she, or was it he, knows
    that off in the yonder reaches
    there might just be a place in that bigness,
    to drive their thoughts to.
    An abandoned two story ranch house
    sits the still, its invisible solitude
    quiet now of children’s voices.
    The hand split shingles on the roof
    still keep the weather out
    both the harsh winter snows and warm summer rains
    don’t touch the singularity of a dry interior
    as if waiting for the family to return
    from where they disappeared to, so long ago.
    That ranch house perched on the mountain side
    has the cook house and porch attached
    where a descendant has placed new tin
    over it. Then left it again.
    And there, under that
    is the place where the questions
    may have gotten answered,
    and maybe not,
    perhaps just having raised those inquiries
    into the meanings of the lives lived
    under the eaves.

    RAY WHITAKER

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    • Ray, this poem is beautiful. I can picture the mountain range and the ranch house that you described, and I see how its emptiness might lead to more questions than answers for passersby. Abandoned houses that were once homes hold forgotten memories, and sometimes it seems as if those memories are alive. Thank you for sharing this piece!

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