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Write a letter to your younger self about a challenge you faced as a child but have since overcome 7 months, 2 weeks ago
straying from the light
as a young pup
i was told many things
some i wouldn’t understand
while others i would abhormy guardian would try their best
to teach me how to behave,
there’s a right time and place
is what they constantly saynever run away
don’t bark at night
don’t eat this or that
never ever bite anyoneover the years i had grown,
not yet fully understanding
why i would do as i am told
i only wanted to make them happythen came a mighty storm
with a deafening echo
and enough flash
to turn night into daymy guardian was not home
and i was terrified, all alone
the wind blasted open my door
and i felt the storm coming for mein a panic i ran away
trying to escape this dreadful storm
yet nowhere i went felt safe
so i kept running further awayeventually i ran far enough
to no longer hear rumbling
yet now, i was completely lost
and couldn’t help but to bark for helpi smelled something approaching,
with relief i ran towards them
only to be greeted by snarls
and growls of impending doomthey told me to leave,
as this was not my home
and they have their own guardian
whom they love and adoreso i ran some more
but i had grown tired & hungry
and stopped to scrounge for scraps
any piece of food i could findi picked up on a pungent smell
coming from a nearby ditch
and against all i have been taught
i scarfed down this half rotten corpseit didn’t take long for me to be sick
my stomach would grumble from pain
and i had to lay down to rest
at least for a few hours until daylightwhen i awoke from my sleep
i was too disoriented
to have proper judgement
for what i was about to doa human was approaching me
with a handful of treats
but i did not trust them
so i growled and lunged at themthey ran off and i ate the treat
that was dropped on the floor
i tried to go back to sleep
but i didn’t get much of a chanceanother human approached me
this time without a treat
but a very shiny stick
with a loop at the endi snarled with every step taken
and i didn’t know what to watch out for
is the stick to be used against me
or is that just a distraction?before i could realize what happened
there was something tugging at my neck
and i was bound to the shiny stick,
slowly being dragged away into a kennelwe rode to a depressing building
and i was taken inside to a cage
i figured this was it for me
as my neighbors would soon agreethey told me their stories as i did mine
one of them said they had a similar tale
and how they have been stuck here since
which only made me further more sadnow i finally know why
i should never run away
or why i shouldn’t bark at night
and especially not to eat everythingmost important of all,
i know why i shouldn’t bite
because now i am held captive
and there is no escape from herea few days passed and i have given up
on ever being able to see my friend again
my guardian truly was taking care of me
and i missed them and their waysand that’s when it happened
i couldn’t believe it…
the cage door opened
and they were theremy guardian came to rescue me!
i was filled with such joy
i would never disobey again
not even during a stormVoting is closed
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Andrew, this is such an interesting and thought-provoking poem. Is it a metaphor for what you’ve experienced? I was moved by the way the puppy was put into a bad situation at no fault of his own. His actions were really just reactions. I was happy that he found his happy ending when so many do not. Thank you for sharing!
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Yes the poem is a metaphor for my own life experiences, being told what to do even though I don’t understand why and then later on finding out why. Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed the poem!
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